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Written on 7 June 2025, For the 'Show Me A Choka Poetry Contest' Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

ripples

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A Pond's Melody

hushed at dusk and dawn
I long to hear the pond's song,
a lullaby melody
hummed on the ripples
that lilts, quivers of shimmers,
across my wet fondled skin
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Carmack Avatar
June 11, 2025 at 7:49 AM
Another favorite of mine among the finalists, congrats on your win.
Anderson Avatar
June 11, 2025 at 9:40 AM
WOW thanks and lot. Wunderbar! Cheers
Rodrigues Avatar
June 11, 2025 at 7:13 AM
Very nice, John! Congrats!
Anderson Avatar
June 11, 2025 at 9:40 AM
Thanks and best Wishes to you.
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