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Written on 7 June 2025, For the 'Show Me A Choka Poetry Contest' Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

ripples

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hushed at dusk and dawn I long to hear the pond's song, a lullaby melody hummed on the ripples that lilts, quivers of shimmers, across my wet fondled skin

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Date: 6/11/2025 7:49:00 AM
Another favorite of mine among the finalists, congrats on your win.
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John Anderson
Date: 6/11/2025 9:40:00 AM
WOW thanks and lot. Wunderbar! Cheers
Date: 6/11/2025 7:13:00 AM
Very nice, John! Congrats!
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John Anderson
Date: 6/11/2025 9:40:00 AM
Thanks and best Wishes to you.

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