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Nette's Choka Contest-6/7/25

A Pond's Melody

ripples on the pond
move in a rhythmic motion
from nature's magical breeze
to span the water
inviting serenity
to my grateful eyes and soul
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 5:12 PM
I, too, lovew the serenity of a pond...something soulful about it. You captured it beautifully.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 17, 2025 at 3:57 PM
your words were captivating, Frederic!! You've captured the sights and feelings evoked when I walk by a nearby pond. Thank you for putting my experience into words. Yellow Rose
Carmack Avatar
June 11, 2025 at 7:46 AM
The longer we live, the more grateful we should become. Congrats on your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 11, 2025 at 7:12 AM
You’re mesmerized! Congrats!
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