A Polished Act

Polish my shoe, polish my shoe today!
Polish shoe, polish shoe, reflect Sun’s ray, 
Hide my head to look at you,
So he will not have a clue,
Polish my shoe till my boss goes away!


Syllables checked at howmanysyllables.com
10,10,7,7,10 with AABBA rhyme 
Limerick Fun Poetry contest
Written 29/08/2020
Sponsor Tania Kitchin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kauffman Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 2:51 PM
Cute and fun, Krish! Congrats and kudos!
Radhakrishna Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 9:35 PM
Thanks Sam, a bit different from usual limerick, more like nursery rhyme!
Zahid Avatar
September 1, 2020 at 11:09 AM
Hahah good one Krish
Radhakrishna Avatar
September 1, 2020 at 12:09 PM
Thanks Paghunda! Pleased you like my limerick!
Romios Avatar
August 30, 2020 at 2:09 PM
Cool and imaginative Pangire xx Have a trophy coming? Good luck.
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 30, 2020 at 2:14 PM
Thanks Pangire! If it pleases readers I am happy! Hope all well with you!
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 6:03 PM
cute one, Krish!
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 6:49 PM
Thanks Andrea! Shining example!:)
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