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A Poet's Flight of Freedom

To fly free is what a poet wants to do It’s possible that it is different Probably not to the taste of a few Quite different and many may dissent. But the poet should continue his ascent. But the battle should be won by the poet People may expect this road to arrive at But his guts and his muse find his own road Flight is freedom in its pure form to poets May dance with clouds and storm, it is his mode ********* Dr. Ram Mehta For the Contest: Metrical Verse by Giorgio Veneto 8th Place win =============================== ***Dizain is Ten lines rhymed a b a b b c c d c d poem; usually (though not by definition) iambic pentameter. This is a Dizain chain. This is originally a French form and initially would have been made up of eight syllablelines, but later ten syllable lines were also used.****

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Date: 5/10/2014 11:52:00 AM
Dr. Ram You have captured what every poet feels and does. We all have our own style of writing and creativity, and its fun to see where it takes us. Thank you for the nice comment on my Her Dream Boy poem.
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Date: 9/24/2013 4:17:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara
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Date: 9/22/2013 8:00:00 PM
Dr Ram, nice Metrical verse win... luv~Linda
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Date: 9/22/2013 5:53:00 AM
good poem, enjoyed the read, congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/21/2013 6:32:00 AM
congrats on a fine win Dr. Mehta
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Date: 9/20/2013 10:26:00 PM
Congratulations for this fine poem. Cheers SuZ
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Date: 9/18/2013 6:46:00 PM
very nice well done friend ~maddie
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Date: 9/17/2013 9:11:00 AM
This is brilliant and very true. I enjoyed this very much.
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Date: 9/15/2013 3:48:00 PM
Nice to find you here Dr. Thanks for your comments. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/15/2013 1:18:00 PM
I agree......a poet's journey may be a battle, but should continue to strive for the sky !! I love this poem, and a difficult form ...it should do well in the contest!!
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Date: 9/15/2013 12:49:00 AM
powerful thoughts as always dear dr ram , always pushing the great works out to us all .thank you . duncan.
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Date: 9/14/2013 10:45:00 PM
This is an awesome poem and form which delighted me so much this morning my dear friend, Dr. Ram. I love it and so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing. Good luck in the contest. Thank you so much as well for your congratulatory comments on my poem. Many congrats also on your recent wins. Sorry if I come only now. Wish you all the best always! Have a nice wkend! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 9/14/2013 10:11:00 AM
love this amazing creation from you Dr Ram...
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Date: 9/14/2013 5:41:00 AM
Creative work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Winners' page for sure well at least in my book..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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