A Poet's Dawn

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I love the smell of the lake at dawn,
It's so peaceful here, just to sit and listen
No sounds but the waves slapping,
 against the shore.
Birds  fly by undisturbed catching
 the mornings breeze.
I've watched many sunrise here,
 With mother nature as mine only campaign.
That’s just fine with me, it adds to the
Personal experience it's a calming time
Just to be shared  by her and I.
She  the grand lady painting the horizon. 
I  the writer with words devotion,
 Pen and paper ready at hand.
I'll sit on a blanket, leaning against
 An old sun bleached log.
Satisfying true hunger desire with
Enlightenment’s simplicity.
She being my eternal muse,
The earthen mother of inspiration.
Behold a masterpiece created by
This divine maiden.
Thus restless I walk along the shore, 
Trying to ponder freedoms liberation
And how to express it.
The blank page mocks me with emptiness's.
Uncertainty.
It's a humbling experience to watch an
Artist at work.
How do I capture what lies before me,
A mortal with only simple tools to
Relate such beauty
Inks imaginations links humanities spirit,
In this venue my name is solos,
And I'm truly at home here,
Lost amongst emotions glory.
A poet on destiny's shore, to wonder
Ever more in thoughts uplifting spiritual
Connection.
Excepting myself for whom I really am,
A castaway laying thin upon the wind.
Eating my lunch alone.

BY: CHERYL ANNA DUNN

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/16/2016 8:23:00 PM
Beautiful write, minus a few grammar flaws barely worth mentioning.
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Date: 4/6/2016 10:52:00 AM
Hi Cherl, It's very beautiful. I enjoyed.........hugs
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Date: 3/5/2016 10:52:00 AM
Wonderful! Wonderful! So so so wonderful....
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Date: 2/28/2016 7:57:00 PM
The poem of course is beautiful, but the artwork really goes well with this fine write! hugs!
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Date: 2/26/2016 12:23:00 AM
Hello Cherl, I dropped by to see if you had a new poem up. :) I'm glad to see all the new support your poems are getting. You are one of my top faves. Good Night my good friend... LINDA
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Date: 2/24/2016 8:24:00 PM
A poet's life can only be deciphered by a fellow poet. This expertly inked yarn gives a mere glimpse into the peculiarities of a versifier's conceptualization of things...
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Date: 2/22/2016 11:41:00 PM
Cherl, sounds like one of the best outings... This is a great poem, in which I enjoy. I can't imagine you having a block moment when writing. Awesome imagery, thank you for sharing your venue... Solos.... Always and forever ~LINAD~
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Date: 2/22/2016 9:44:00 AM
Hi Cheryl: Beautiful imagery, walking among nature with an imaginary pen in hand. Most of my poems are spontaneous albeit I'm inspired by poets such as you. An Italian hug!
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Date: 2/21/2016 3:41:00 AM
a delicacy of a wonderful piece so well structured, cherl... what a gem!..huggs
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Date: 2/19/2016 4:48:00 PM
Thank U for sharing landscape beauty and nature sound; and letting me recall time spent on mound, writing, viewing Hudson River overlooking New Jersey.
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Date: 2/19/2016 3:48:00 PM
Wow! how beautiful...you and nature, a shared experience on the shore at dawn, a time when all is still peaceful....a captivating moment of uplifting solitude. Well done, Cherl! #7 ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 2/18/2016 4:55:00 PM
You truly take one there, Cherl, lovely poetry a pleasure to read
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Date: 2/16/2016 11:34:00 PM
Cheryl my dear, I put myself in that scene and felt like a million Dollars, so peaceful and serene, you certainly have a way with words, take care..........Vera
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