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A Poetic Tale

For many years they had exchanged passionate looks, as if a pair of lovers. Suddenly, she plucked up courage and said: - I love you! An eerie silence permeated the air, and the world stood still for a few moments. - I have always loved you! And their lips touched, materializing the dreams of kisses so much desired...

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Date: 9/23/2010 11:55:00 AM
Benedito, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.
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Date: 9/21/2010 3:02:00 PM
that is a nice tale, Congratz on being featured.
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Date: 9/21/2010 11:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Benedito. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/16/2010 10:57:00 AM
I am so pleased to have been able to read your poetry this morning Benedito. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/16/2010 6:43:00 AM
Nice one enjoyed, P.D.
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