A Poetic Tale

For many years they had exchanged passionate looks, as if a pair of lovers.
Suddenly, she plucked up courage and said:
- I love you!
An eerie silence permeated the air, and the world stood still for a few moments.
- I have always loved you!
And their lips touched, materializing the dreams of kisses so much desired...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 23, 2010 at 11:55 AM
Benedito, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.
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September 21, 2010 at 3:02 PM
that is a nice tale, Congratz on being featured.
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September 21, 2010 at 11:06 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Benedito. Love, Carol
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April 16, 2010 at 10:57 AM
I am so pleased to have been able to read your poetry this morning Benedito. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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April 16, 2010 at 6:43 AM
Nice one enjoyed, P.D.
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