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Similar to the way a poet begins his creative process I'm not writing this—I craft hastily as views progress Doubt often sneaks in and affects how a choice feels The words used in charming, deceitful deals Limiting their ability to capture ephemeral moments By finding that masterpiece, I'm seeking atonement And craft those thoughts into eloquent language The facial reactions indicate your inner anguish However, despite all this doubt, rumors persist As weights drop, soul rovers stay, and rivers desist Inspiration comes in the form of a soft breeze At dawn, there was a whisper among the trees Bringing with them fantasies of beauty and grace As you unlock your soul from jail, bear up space Despite the total uncertainty they feel inside, Simply don't defraud yourself, and I don't hide The poet tends to wish for and aspire to write How petals turned red and lilies grew white Times of both divine beauty and searing ardor I may have sealed my soul in a sheath of armor Also, when you start to feel your doubts fade, Craftsman mind, wonder over his own shade As dew-kissed petals, an artist is left with a glow Of ethereal inspiration, then creative insight flows.
Written: May 30th, 2023

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Date: 6/2/2023 4:17:00 AM
"As dew-kissed petals, an artist is left with a glow Of ethereal inspiration, then creative insight flows." You have concluded this beautiful poem with such amazing lines ! We needn't doubt, just begin writing and soon the poet in you will be fuelled with inspiration. But sad to say that this inspiration doesn't come to all as it comes to Lasaad..... :) Lovely poem!
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Date: 6/1/2023 11:28:00 AM
You have created some artful lines in this one today. I like the dew-kissed petals which made me think of a rose blossoming out in early morn. Thanks for sharing this one that I am sure comes from an inner spirit of creativity and peace. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 5/31/2023 6:58:00 PM
WoW! Lasaad, This is so well written and filled with much wisdom. I echo what Jan said. Have a great evening:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/31/2023 6:50:00 AM
Lovely poetry Sotto, I love the way your insights flow, creating a masterpiece with a glow… Belle
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Date: 5/31/2023 6:06:00 AM
Masterful write dear Lasaad! Debx
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Date: 5/31/2023 4:14:00 AM
Spoken like an artist: As dew-kissed petals, an artist is left with a glow Of ethereal inspiration, then creative insight flows...
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Date: 5/31/2023 1:36:00 AM
such wonderful insight so eloquently described Sotto Poet, I have to stop what I'm doing to write as once the idea has passed it is too late of course so often mine are silly poems but i proudly live with the "Queen of Poop" title lol. adding this gem to my faves:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/30/2023 7:58:00 PM
Great imagery and feelings my friend for a poets quest. I like the last couplet,” As dew-kissed petals, an artist is left with a glow Of ethereal inspiration, then creative insight flows.” Soup mail for permission on your poems.
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