A Poet Looks At 4 Am

The night falls down around me in this poet's reverie.
Words stick to my moon-parched throat until I set them free.

Images of life and love are painted on my heart.
Stars outside my window have their knowledge to impart.

The world I travel forth in has experience to give.
My eyes have seen the glory of this place I choose to live.

And now the daylight beckons from the unforgiving skies.
My mind is full and restless as my pen to paper flies.

Night has flown away but still I'm left with thoughts profound.
This song of life I've written here is making such a sound.

Dawn has broken and I thank God for every given word.
I'm grateful for this chance I have to reach out and be heard.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 4:39 AM
Hi debs, this is a stunner well done I can see why you like it ,congratulations on your win love xx
Mehta Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 1:19 AM
Enjoyed the poem and congrats, Deb
May Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 7:52 PM
vongrats on your win
Konos Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 12:28 PM
All the poetry submitted was heartfelt. From love throughout life to love in the depths of death with reflections of nature. You are all deserving First Place Winners and I thank you for entering your favorites in my contest.
Jones Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 2:36 PM
Congratulations, said very well for us all...
Guzzi Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 6:57 PM
loved [moon-parched] BOY have I been here BUT I seldom get up and write anything down! LOL Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Richards Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 2:17 PM
You put words into the mouths of many of us, better than we could ourselves. I hear a true poet's heart speaking so beautifully! :) Congratulations!
Delaney Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 11:25 AM
Love the flow of this, Deb: Congratulations on your win. SuZ
Oyewole Avatar
June 11, 2013 at 10:35 PM
Beautifully expressed. Congrats on your well deserved win. AO
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 10:58 PM
deb,I have stayed up several times past 3 a.m and written poetry. I love that you do it too. That first couplet was an amazing image. Luv, Andrea
Valmiki Avatar
February 28, 2012 at 2:46 AM
good work.....
Kendrick Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 6:28 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Wilson Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 9:28 PM
thank you Sara
Poet Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 11:28 AM
Beautiful poem Deb.Congrats on your win.
Wilson Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 9:21 PM
oh thank you Kash
Brown Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 5:34 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Deb. Love, Carol
Wilson Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 9:19 PM
thanks so much Carol
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 4:54 PM
Congratulations on your win! This is amazing. Words stick to my moon parched throat until I set them free, is my favorite line and your poem is going into my faves. Blessings, Rhonda
Wilson Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 9:21 PM
thank you for the honor of fave-ing me Rhonda!!
Macmillan Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 2:36 PM
THIS IS FANTASTIC! Deb Wilson, poet-rockstar! Loved this. I'm supposed to be doing laundry. But I'm just so glad I read this first! Not sure what you won, what contest this was for, but man, it is just good stuff!Hugs, Cyndi
Wilson Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 9:23 PM
thank you so much..I'm so very pleased that you liked it Cyndi!!
Sweetheart Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 11:08 AM
congrats Deb on an exciting win for these awesome words and a great title too luv..
Wilson Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 9:26 PM
thanks Linda-Marie..I appreciate it...glad you liked the title too!
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February 26, 2012 at 7:59 AM
Such amazing poetry my dear poet friend... Great write....luv Michael
Wilson Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 9:27 PM
oh thanx Michael ...I'm so happy you enjoyed it!
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