Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Tetractys

A Poem In Conception

A 
Poem 
Sleeps in me
With high traffic
And I search for nouns, verbs and images.

Breathe in her mouth, speak in ears, touch lips
To mould her shape,
Feel and hear
In my
Heart.

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Dt. 16-10-13
5th place win
Dr. Ram mehta
I read three of your poems namely Poetry by candlelight your first on the soup,The Poet and
The poet named Dan and above poem is the result

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February 10, 2016 at 12:33 PM I'm currently doing a school project on Tetractys. I had to look at ten that I liked from the internet. In my list, this one is my all time favorite. I love this poem and how its simple but makes you think. Thank you for creating such a lovely poem. ~ Carrie

Skat A November 6, 2013 at 8:29 PM nice win Dr... Love ~SKAT~

Juliet Ligon November 1, 2013 at 6:01 PM Clever description of a poem's conception.

Sara Kendrick October 31, 2013 at 6:19 PM Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Sandra Adams October 30, 2013 at 8:31 PM congrats on your win :)

Donna Jones October 30, 2013 at 3:14 PM Congratulations on your win...

Shanity Rain October 30, 2013 at 1:29 PM wow! This is one that should be printed !congratulations deserved win!

Poet Destroyer A October 29, 2013 at 9:08 PM congratulations Dr Ram... always~ LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen October 29, 2013 at 2:46 PM - Congratulations on your winning poem in Dan Kearley contest - Nice to read your words about a common friend, Dr.Ram. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Stanley Cannon October 18, 2013 at 11:26 AM I learn from your wisdom! Your poems indeed have life! One of the few poems I have posted to date "Angry Words" was inspired be a dear friend who gets so frustrated when the words don't come or are not the masterpiece that was envisioned. Creating something beautiful should bring some satisfaction.

Karen Anglesey October 17, 2013 at 10:44 AM You captivated me with this meaningful delight. I agree, the end result comes from the loving relationship within. Awesome :)

Joseph Matose October 17, 2013 at 12:52 AM Great write Dr. I at times feel the same- a poem takes an amorphous shape in my mind which unless attended to disappears. What makes poets unique is that they don't ignore this conception. They blow life into it, give it form and share with others. This is amazing DR. MEHTA. JM

Demetrios Trifiatis October 16, 2013 at 7:22 AM Yes, Dr Ram, the poem sleeps in us waiting to wake it from its slumber! Marvelous!

Andrea Dietrich October 15, 2013 at 5:43 PM this one is very nice!

Harry Horsman October 15, 2013 at 5:41 PM this is truly a remarkable poem, Dr,

Sara Kendrick October 15, 2013 at 4:37 PM Very creative work..Enjoyed reading this passionate work today..Thanks for stopping by.Sara

Bl Devnath October 15, 2013 at 11:04 AM Lovely expression my friend with nice conception. Enjoyed a lot. Loved always, bl

Jake Ponce October 15, 2013 at 10:25 AM This is really lovely. It's great that you were able to capture this moment in a complete form!!!