A Poem I Offer To My Lady

The sea for me,
it's a flood of
salt that
sweetens my vision ...
The sun is an eruption
of heat that makes
the fresh morning  born
in my life ...
Heaven is a flood
in blue that colors me
of enthusiasm ... and your
body is the universe
where I live safely,
where I plant myself and
fruit my
perpetuity...!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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March 7, 2021 at 12:42 PM
Hello Alakas, this is a cute love. you created . Salute Darlene
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March 9, 2021 at 12:32 PM
Hello Alakas, yes love must be cultivated to last. I believe this in eternity and it would be worthy. Alakas it is a good point of view. Salute Darlene my dear friend.
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March 8, 2021 at 12:01 PM
A great Brazilian poet said: That love is eternal while it lasts! Love is a plant, a flower, it has to be cultivated to last ... we must believe in this eternity, otherwise it would not be worthy... That is my pointer of view ! salute dear, alkas
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March 8, 2021 at 11:02 AM
Hello Alakas. is this love a strong bond between two people? Or is it something that won't last? Is it a relationship or fascination between two people? Salute Darlene. Thank you my dear friend Alakas.
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March 7, 2021 at 5:07 PM
Thank you dear ! Love is ALWAYS cute. And a lover must receive all caress a lover could donate...This m simple and common way i offer to the one i love.... Good Night And Nice DREAMS my Sweet friend... salute alkas
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