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A Poem From the Unknown

I observe palls of leaves, drifting on the wind Compelling me to write, but my page keeps going limp Fraying along straight edges, curling into crimp, Nuanced in nature, daintiest touch rebuffs my whims Thoughts become hesitant, so readily demurred I scribble tenuous nothings, reflecting absent words Cant tell which is moving, the leaves or my world Seemingly fluxed together, synchronicity bestirs Impossible to measure, let alone describe this scene Small eddies all around me, vortex on grasses green, As I look upon the tumult, my imagination reconvenes Ink begins flowing again, and words start to scream Disenfranchisement over, now feeling overjoyed Balance is restored, the moment remains unspoiled I look down at my sheet of paper, if only to recoil Not in horror! Amazement, this little poem self compiled. YOUR PERSONAL FAVORITE, NO. 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: L MILTON HANKINS 18/10/21

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Date: 11/30/2020 12:33:00 PM
Like as i David Not in horror but Amazement. Congratulations David I see you made the Anthology Well done and deserved my friend What Poem was it David id like to check it out again
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 11/30/2020 1:48:00 PM
My brittle wall i hide behind Not going to lie David my mate best feeling ever
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David Kavanagh
Date: 11/30/2020 12:58:00 PM
Had to check that out thought you where joking I see you made it too, I’m delighted you did, mine was a haiku “time mayfly by, what one made the cut for you cheers David
Date: 11/30/2020 12:32:00 PM
You can now say you are actually in fact a published writer / poet
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Date: 11/29/2020 8:12:00 PM
Please attribute this delicious feast of imagery to your incredible skill. David, I am so in awe.... Rhyme is off scale excellent.... You know what I mean by that.... Daring rhyme, not boring... Happily masticating your delectable meditation. Thank you for sharing your growth with everyone here...
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David Kavanagh
Date: 11/29/2020 11:45:00 PM
Heya Sigrid thank you so much for another of your fantastic analytical comments, wasn’t too sure how to put this one together, so the idea of the poem writing itself is actually very real, the only hard part was trying to express how this actually happens cheers David
Date: 11/29/2020 11:23:00 AM
Hello David kavanagh, you did very well with not knowing what to create in poetry. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/30/2020 10:33:00 AM
Hello David Kavanagh, yes some poems do write themselves. Cheers Darlene enjoy your day my friend.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 11/29/2020 12:01:00 PM
Hi Darlene thank you so much, I’m sure we’ve all experienced some poems writing themselves, as this one did for me, cheers David

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