A Poem For You

A POEM FOR YOU





Unable am I 

A poem for you to write my love

For 

The wealth of words mournfully pales 

Before 

The treasure of your unrivaled beauty!





© Demetrios Trifiatis

    29 OCTOBER 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Chircop Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 9:50 AM
How very romantic this is..Manytimes the shortest words says it best..Just beautiful
Trifiatis Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 9:53 AM
You my dear, Charmain, certainly know best! How could it be otherwise? Thank you for your visit and comment!
Matose Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 2:25 AM
So much in so few words. This is a great write. Thanks for penning one. Friend, JM
Trifiatis Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 6:38 AM
My good friend, Joseph, thank you for visiting and for making such a nice comment!
Jones Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 11:05 PM
Ohhhh...poets painting blushing cheeks on pretty girls..how romantic and beautiful...:-) :-) :-) :-)
Trifiatis Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 6:40 AM
Donna, my dear, I am certain poems have been written for you and better poems than this! Thank you!
Bauer Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 6:57 PM
very touching and lovely!
Trifiatis Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 6:41 AM
Every sensitive and loving heart, dear Ilene, would find this little poem touching and lovely! Thank you so much!
Onclaud Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 11:08 AM
oooh, what a celebration of love's beauty, D... dreamy write so divinely expressed!..:) huggs
Trifiatis Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 12:28 PM
Fortunately ladies are here to inspire men with their beauty and kindness. They are poetry incarnated! No matter how far they are, they always are close to my heart! Thank you, nette, for your visit and your dreamy comment!
Anglesey Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 11:06 AM
At times words just cannot express everything. So well versed like a burst of magic.
Trifiatis Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 12:23 PM
Karen, you are magic yourself my dear,as this is your first visit my heart offers to you some of HER beats as a thank you note!
Andresen Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 7:40 AM
- Beautiful, Demetrios !!!! - Yes....WooW !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 9:06 AM
Anne Lise, knowing how sensitive you are I easily could translate your WooW to volumes of words! Thank you!
Sivey Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 6:25 AM
Your philosophy rings true within this write my friend! I surely loved reading this enlightening poem this morning! What a brilliant piece, such a beautifully loving poem! Great Work!!
Trifiatis Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 9:03 AM
My good friend,Russell, I think you would agree that no-word, no matter how strong in meaning is, can express our love and admiration to the one lady we adore! Thank you!
Manassian Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 2:48 AM
Beautiful..beauty etched in every line.....a 7 for I cannot give more....filakia
Trifiatis Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 9:00 AM
Such a beautiful comment from such a lovely lady how could I ever refuse? Thank you!
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