A Poem For the Pentecost

~ A Poem for Shavuos ~  *

  Two Jews, three opinions
    Twenty-nine of us need three minyans  *

  Yet when we camped at Sinai, all arguments stopped
    Jaws in heaven must have dropped

  Angels astonished - Not one human complaint?
    If they'd blood in their wings, surely they'd faint 

  What caused this dramatic transformation
    from rank division to unification? ...

  The divine souls G-d implanted within us *
    embraced their source, Divinity Itself

  At that juncture, our fragmented souls reunited
    Like 'one man with one heart,' crystal-clear sighted

  Quarreling stopped, though later to restart
    ~ For a magic moment, Divine souls not torn apart  


  ______________________________________________  
  *Notes: 'Shavuos' is the original Hebrew name of the hol-
  iday known to Christians by the name of the 'Pentecost.'  
  Shavuos means 'weeks:' Seven weeks between Passover
  and Shavuos. The next (50th) day is the holiday, the 'Pen-
  tecost.' ... A 'minyan' is a Jewish prayer quorum, which re-
  quires ten men age 13 or over for public prayers. (The 
  number '29' in the poem therefore introduces a slightly 
  jocular tone, as by rights it should be 30)... Finally, see
  Genesis 2:7, wherein G-d breathes a soul into Adam
  through his nostrils.
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Date: 5/21/2023 7:07:00 PM
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/21/2023 7:46:00 PM
Thanks for your encouragement on this one, Kim! A special day arrives lates this week! Blessings, Gershon
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