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a poem for my love

I don't want your black sunshine Your golden locks waving in the cosmic abyss I don't want your silver lips touching mine The rays of glory beholding their splendor Instead I want your love And I want it in a bitter cup That only I could drink

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Date: 8/28/2019 4:37:00 AM
"a bitter cup That only I could drink" is a beautiful parallel to the bittersweet possessiveness of love. Great write, Cheno.
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Date: 5/3/2019 8:35:00 AM
Hello Cheno Achima, you spoke what was on your mind, so the person knows what you want. Have a nice day my friend.
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CHENO ACHIMAL
Date: 5/13/2019 2:11:00 AM
thank you for your response darlene!
Date: 4/18/2019 7:48:00 AM
Potent, packed little poem. Fantastic.
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CHENO ACHIMAL
Date: 4/22/2019 6:44:00 AM
thank you!