Cheno Achimal Poet Free verse

A Poem For My Love

I don't want your black sunshine
Your golden locks waving in the cosmic abyss
I don't want your silver lips touching mine
The rays of glory beholding their splendor
Instead I want your love
And I want it in a bitter cup
That only I could drink

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Michael Whatley August 28, 2019 at 4:37 AM "a bitter cup That only I could drink" is a beautiful parallel to the bittersweet possessiveness of love. Great write, Cheno.

Darlene De Beaulieu May 3, 2019 at 8:35 AM Hello Cheno Achima, you spoke what was on your mind, so the person knows what you want. Have a nice day my friend. Cheno Achimal May 13, 2019 at 2:11 AM thank you for your response darlene!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 18, 2019 at 7:48 AM Potent, packed little poem. Fantastic. Cheno Achimal April 22, 2019 at 6:44 AM thank you!