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A Poem For Carlos

Strong, Sensitive, Provider, Protector Loving, Considerate, Sweet as Nectar Determined, Visionary, Intelligent, Ingenious, Not Allowed, Nothing between us. Compassionate, Mysterious, Muse, Friend Sexy, Committed... The Epitome of Man

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/17/2013 3:37:00 AM

- Hello Da Shawn - thanks for your first poem, I hope there will be more in the future. - Welcome to P-Soup - Have fun with poetry, share your thoughts and words here with us. - Welcome to read some of my poems. (give comment and get back) - Always nice with several new friends. - Good luck with your writing. - Have a great time here at P-Soup. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/16/2013 10:29:00 PM

soup mail!

Skat A

Date: 6/16/2013 6:50:00 PM

Hi D Avery, i sense a little alliteration here, and i like the poem vrey much. and what a friend Carlos is!!! , a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/16/2013 6:05:00 PM

DaShawn,. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda

Kim Van Breda

Date: 6/16/2013 6:52:00 AM

Awesome-- the man and the poem ;) Welcome to P/Soup x