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A Poem For a Rose

Her thorny stems are vicious Yet supple in the breeze Her blooms are just delicious And scent, my nose, to tease A simple poem for a rose To tease her in the sun To lie in her scent and doze A delicious moments fun Contest : 29 Words 7th Place My Twenty Nine words are :- Her Thorny Stems Are Vicious. 5 Yet Supple In The Breeze. 10 Blooms Just Delicious And Scent. 15 My Nose To Tease A. 20 Simple Poem For Rose Sun. 25 Lie Doze Moments Fun. 29

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2010 4:54:00 PM

Hey, you won this, huh? that's great!! I really enjoyed it . LUv, Andrea

Gordon Hickman

Date: 9/29/2010 3:32:00 AM

A very skilful poem Nick, sorry I've been a bit late commenting, and many thanks for your visit and pleased you had a chuckle. Gordon, (hicky)

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/25/2010 11:56:00 AM

absolutely lovely Nick, congrats on your win in the contest

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/24/2010 11:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Nick in Nikko Palmario's contest "29 Words". Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 9/23/2010 5:22:00 PM

well done and unique, congrats to you Nick

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/23/2010 12:46:00 PM

Congratulations on this fine win in the contest, Nick

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/23/2010 11:21:00 AM

Congrats Nick on your win in Nikko's contest.. an awesome poem.. an amazing win for u to enjoy my friend.. beautiful with luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/23/2010 10:58:00 AM

Definitely enjoyed this poem of yours, Nick! Cool contrast you put in here as well-- congrats on your win in my contest :) -- nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/20/2010 9:13:00 AM

Lovely Nick.. Nikko will enjoy this tribute to a lovely flower so sweet... good luck int he contest my friend and so happy to hear from u luv... hope u have been well and happy too... nice seeing your name on my comments page... enjoyed.. my friend..