Nick Bagnall Poet Free verse

A Poem For a Rose

Her thorny stems are vicious
Yet supple in the breeze
Her blooms are just delicious
And scent, my nose, to tease

A simple poem for a rose
To tease her in the sun
To lie in her scent and doze
A delicious moments fun





Contest : 29 Words 
7th Place




My Twenty Nine words are :-
Her
Thorny
Stems
Are
Vicious.    5
Yet
Supple
In
The
Breeze.    10
Blooms
Just
Delicious
And
Scent.      15
My
Nose
To
Tease
A.             20
Simple
Poem
For
Rose
Sun.        25
Lie
Doze
Moments
Fun.       29

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Andrea Dietrich September 29, 2010 at 4:54 PM Hey, you won this, huh? that's great!! I really enjoyed it . LUv, Andrea

Gordon Hickman September 29, 2010 at 3:32 AM A very skilful poem Nick, sorry I've been a bit late commenting, and many thanks for your visit and pleased you had a chuckle. Gordon, (hicky)

Francine Roberts September 25, 2010 at 11:56 AM absolutely lovely Nick, congrats on your win in the contest

Carol Sunshine Brown September 24, 2010 at 11:27 AM Congratulations on your win Nick in Nikko Palmario's contest "29 Words". Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Robert A. Dufresne September 23, 2010 at 5:22 PM well done and unique, congrats to you Nick

Dr.Ram Mehta September 23, 2010 at 12:46 PM Congratulations on this fine win in the contest, Nick

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 23, 2010 at 11:21 AM Congrats Nick on your win in Nikko's contest.. an awesome poem.. an amazing win for u to enjoy my friend.. beautiful with luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K. September 23, 2010 at 10:58 AM Definitely enjoyed this poem of yours, Nick! Cool contrast you put in here as well-- congrats on your win in my contest :) -- nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 20, 2010 at 9:13 AM Lovely Nick.. Nikko will enjoy this tribute to a lovely flower so sweet... good luck int he contest my friend and so happy to hear from u luv... hope u have been well and happy too... nice seeing your name on my comments page... enjoyed.. my friend..

Wilma Neels September 17, 2010 at 6:06 AM A beauty you got here Nick. Best wishes if you entered Nikko's contest ;)

Carol Sunshine Brown September 16, 2010 at 11:08 AM Enjoyed reading your poetry today Nick. The best to you in the contest. Hope you have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick September 16, 2010 at 5:32 AM Enjoyed reading your very fluid poetic write this morning..This reads like winners' circle to me..Good luck in the contest..Sara

Anthony Nutter September 16, 2010 at 2:56 AM Well written vivid description of the fairest of flowers. Good luck in the contes. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit