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A Poem Comes Alive

eyes fixed on the screen..

          fingers search for right letters..

                            mind dreams words to say..

           phrases form meanings of life..

                                  and so a poem is born..

on writing and wordstanka

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 1, 2010 at 8:19 PM

Creativity comes alive in your hands Michael when u pen poetry like this rare beauty my W.K.... so awesome .. so superbly written ..so meaningful luv.. your J.G. in frigid temps tonight luv..

Joe Maverick

December 1, 2010 at 5:41 PM

good piece to read today,welcome inspiration.

Wilma Neels

December 1, 2010 at 11:19 AM

A very relatable Tanka Michael, sometimes its amazing how we give birth to our writes.. I am just relaxing tonight ;-) love Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

November 30, 2010 at 11:46 AM

It is in this "dream" state that some of the most eloquent poems emerge, Michael. An excellent tanka to which Soup members can relate. Goes to my faves. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 29, 2010 at 9:07 AM

May your week bring you good health,may your heart overflow with love, and may your life bring you amazing inspiration to continue your writing. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning and thank you for sharing it Michael. Love, Carol

Elizabeth Bark

November 29, 2010 at 7:47 AM

hey i just posted a new one, check it out i was in school and our teacher wanted us to write in our journals and this is what i came up with...its the first acrostic i have ever written...would love to hear what you think...thanks agian for all the sweet comments....love forever and always, Lizzy.b <3