A Poem About Him

So full of shape is fancy
Mine 
A rounded love so complete
Yours,
Disjointed lines
Emotional terrets
Spitting 'I love you'
Unconsciously...
Me,
All too aware of my feelings
Bleeding
I love you more
I love you better
I love you best.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Canerdy Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 9:27 AM
Very thought-provoking, I enjoyed. Janice
Daisy Avatar
July 5, 2016 at 3:00 AM
Thank you Janice for the appreciation.
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