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A Pleasant Autumn Day

Autumn has come and the golden sun Which shines in the garden today Is gentler now, and a walk will allow Without making us all melt away In August, it was scorching and blazing A furnace is mild in compare Now it's warmth is a joy and amazing This day is so pleasant and fair In summer I felt like a captive From the house we would jump in the car We really weren't feeling adaptive In 110 degree heat...can't stroll far October has come, and we praise God The summer is gone, we're so glad Now over the garden and backyard I trod With my children, and their precious dad

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Date: 10/11/2020 2:13:00 PM
Vivid imagery, you described the season very well..
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 10/26/2020 12:56:00 PM
It is one of my favorite seasons <3
Date: 10/2/2020 7:05:00 AM
- A beautiful autumn poem, a perfect day to enjoy Betty Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 10/26/2020 1:00:00 PM
Thank you :-) Today is a bit more chilly and there is a gentle rain falling, which is so very welcome after a long drought. This is a beautiful season. I'm glad you liked my poem Anna-Lise <3
Date: 9/30/2020 9:11:00 PM
You take one there, deep within the poem, love this. Betty Jo.
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 9/30/2020 9:59:00 PM
Thank you :-) I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 9/30/2020 4:52:00 PM
I love the light hearted cadence of this fine fall poem! Enjoyed this very much, Betty Jo! :)
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 9/30/2020 9:57:00 PM
Thank you! It is my favorite time of the year, and does make me feel light hearted :-)

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