Lucilla Carrillo Poet Free verse

A Plane Tragedy

A Plane Tragedy 

Today on July 17th of 2014 Tragedy has happened.
A plane with 298 passengers went down. It was shot
by a Missal 25 miles from Russia.
 
It was a big tragedy that no one will forget. The
passengers never knew what hit them, but their 
destinations They would never reach. They didn't 
even have time to put themselves in good with the
Lord.

The people that died this day are already in heaven.
There they will find the peace and glory - that could
not be found here on Earth. The ones that committed 
the crime, won't ever be free. They will have to run 
and hide.

Someone said today- we are able to put a man on the 
Moon, but we have not been able to_____ what? I say
we have not been able to get rid of Hate. It is sad, but 
it's the truth. We don't need others to destroy us. We
destroy ourselves... 

07/18/2014
By Lucilla M. Carrillo

Note: May they all rest in peace.

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Duke Beaufort November 13, 2016 at 10:32 AM The sad things that happen are tough to take. Thank-you for the perspective.

Shadow Hamilton August 4, 2014 at 7:50 PM a very wise and thoughtful pen Lucilla on this terrible tragedy hugs Lucilla Carrillo August 4, 2014 at 10:19 PM Thank Shadow for your nice comment.

Len Gasun July 29, 2014 at 11:27 AM A great tribute to all victims of the tragedy my dearest friend Lucilla. May the souls of all victims rest in peace. Thank u so much for sharing and God bless u my dear friend. By the way, I've learned from our very dear friend Andrea (from her blog )about your health. Get well soon. You're in my prayers my dear friend. Sending u all my love and hugs! God bless! love lots, Leonora Lucilla Carrillo July 29, 2014 at 3:31 PM From the bottom of my heart I thank you. I do need all the prayers I can get right now.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 29, 2014 at 9:44 AM - Hope you have a great this day, Lucilla !!! - <3 <3 <3 to YOU !!! // Anne-Lise :) Lucilla Carrillo July 29, 2014 at 3:32 PM Thank you Anne Lise. It means a lot to me.

Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 29, 2014 at 5:07 AM Hi Lucilla, I heard from Andrea how you were ill and just wanted you to know that I am also praying for you-- you may not know me, but I really hope and pray for your health...what you've written here, is very moving, and for you to put a voice to this tragedy, is precious-- it is so disheartening to read/see news about this and the other recent plane tragedies in Taiwan & Algeria... may their souls rest in peace and may they find justice. God bless you! Lucilla Carrillo July 29, 2014 at 9:18 AM Thank you Bin; I am at this time not feeling well at all. I thought of not writing anymore, because I have problems with my vision too. Thank you for your nice comment. I will visit you later.

Justin Bordner July 28, 2014 at 8:50 PM May the victims Rest In Peace. Targeting civilians is is an abomination of warfare that can rarely be justified. I respect your moral will to address these geopolitical issues Lucilla. Good work! J.A.B. Lucilla Carrillo July 28, 2014 at 9:04 PM Thank you ; I will check on you later. I still have a little time left here. At the moment I am not well.

Peter Dome July 28, 2014 at 6:34 PM I almost cried reading your heartfelt words. I think you speak for everyone. we are all sickened by such an evil and shocking cowardly horror. God is watching. they will not get away with it. What gave innocent people and little children done to deserve this. It breaks my heart. just one tragedy after another. A very good thought provoking and emotional write. well done. Pete. Lucilla Carrillo July 28, 2014 at 7:45 PM Thanks for the nice comment Peter. I will check on you later.

Gry Christensen July 27, 2014 at 9:23 PM Hi Lucilla, You write with feeling and thoroughness about a gruesome tragedy. Lucilla Carrillo July 27, 2014 at 9:34 PM Thank you very much for reading.

Andrea Dietrich July 27, 2014 at 6:14 PM Hello, Lucilla. I think I saw a soupmail for me from you. I see no new poetry, so I will go check my soupmail. I am finished for the day with comments and need to make dinner!

Harry Horsman July 27, 2014 at 10:52 AM This is special Lucilla, written only with a special kind of mind a wondrous caring mind,,,honoured to have read this..... Lucilla Carrillo July 27, 2014 at 3:35 PM harry; Your words mean a great deal to me. Thank you very much.

Bl Devnath July 23, 2014 at 11:20 AM Extremely sad it's. You have rightly said we have not been able to get rid of hate and we are destroying ourselves. You are given a nice heart by God, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl Lucilla Carrillo July 27, 2014 at 3:32 PM Thank you so much for reading, also for your nice comment.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 22, 2014 at 10:13 AM - I'm 110% agree with you dear Lucilla - Well written!! - (I'm on holiday in Turkey ... will fly home tomorrow ....over Russia ....)- " May they all rest in peace !!!!!! " - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Lucilla Carrillo July 22, 2014 at 12:00 PM Thank you so much Anne Lise. Enjoy yourself... Lucilla

Nette Onclaud July 21, 2014 at 2:46 PM another unnecessary tragedy, lucy.. your lyrical piece captures the loss and pain of this event.. wishing you well as always.. huggs Lucilla Carrillo July 22, 2014 at 12:02 PM You are so right. That was something we didn't need.

Ralph Sergi July 21, 2014 at 7:35 AM Hi Lucia: A heartfelt tribute to those poor people who died by a senseless act. Thank you for your comment on my knights crusade. I LOVE TAPIOCA. Lucilla Carrillo July 22, 2014 at 12:03 PM Thank you Ralph. Blessings

Ravi Sathasivam July 20, 2014 at 1:08 AM A very heartfelt write. Sad. my thoughts and prayers are with the victims and families. TFS Lucilla Carrillo July 22, 2014 at 12:06 PM Thank you Ravi, we need to pray for everyone.

Andrea Dietrich July 19, 2014 at 10:14 PM I rarely follow the news so I did not hear about this. So sad. but you are right. they are now in a better place and we are left with this hate filled planet. I am glad it went fast for them and that they did not suffer slowly. Shame on the horrible people that did this. Lucilla Carrillo July 19, 2014 at 11:18 PM Yes, It is a shame that these things have to happen. Thanks for reading.

Andrea Dietrich July 19, 2014 at 10:12 PM hi, Lucilla. Wish you could go to Rio one day. It truly is a charming city that I was fortunate enough to see back in the year 2000. Now let me read this poem of yours. Lucilla Carrillo July 19, 2014 at 11:19 PM I don't think it will happen in this life.

Connie Marcum Wong July 19, 2014 at 5:51 PM The families that will suffer their loss in this tragedy are the ones I will pray for. Karma will take care of the ones who took their lives. 2/3 of the passengers were Dutch and because I feel Amsterdam is like a second home I have deeper feelings of empathy for all involved. I thought your poem was a beautiful heartfelt tribute Lucilla. P.S. The actual count was 298 as there were 3 infants onboard. Blessings, Connie Lucilla Carrillo July 19, 2014 at 5:58 PM Thank you Connie for reading and also for the info. They kept saying it was 295. I will correct it.

Matthew Anish July 19, 2014 at 5:24 PM You were moved by the tragedy as were many other poets around the world. Good Job! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Lucilla Carrillo July 19, 2014 at 5:54 PM Peter; you always give me such nice comments. May many blessings come your way. Lucilla Carrillo July 19, 2014 at 5:51 PM Thank you so much Matthew. Yes this was something that touched everyone with a good heart.

Jan Allison July 19, 2014 at 12:12 PM my thoughts and prayers are with the victims and families and all associated with this terrible tragedy. A heartfelt write Lucilla. Hugs Jan xxx Lucilla Carrillo July 19, 2014 at 5:55 PM Jan; Thank you for reading and for your prayers.

Pandita Sietesantos July 19, 2014 at 10:42 AM Dearest Lucilla, thank you dedicating this great powerful write to those who innocently lost their lives in this all too tragic event. Blessings and prayers for all! Lucilla Carrillo July 19, 2014 at 10:57 AM Thank you so much Pandita. It was very tragic. We still don't know what's up ahead.

Paul Callus July 19, 2014 at 9:39 AM Excellent write, Lucilla!! Why is it always the innocent that have to suffer? But those who live by the sword eventually die by the sword. Judgment day arrives for all. Impressive final lines, too. Take care! // paul Lucilla Carrillo July 19, 2014 at 9:50 AM Thank you Paul. I agree with you. Judgment day will come and sooner than we think. How do you like my little ( Bobo the Clown )?

Tim Smith July 19, 2014 at 9:05 AM Very tragic....We must pray....hugs Lucilla Carrillo July 19, 2014 at 9:52 AM Hi Tim; Yes we must pray and not only for them, but for all humanity. Have a great week end.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 19, 2014 at 7:19 AM oh my God Lucy!! such a bad bad news.. :( and Im with you in praying for the victims salvation.. hugs and blessings to you.. :) Lucilla Carrillo July 19, 2014 at 9:56 AM Thanks Olive; I just had to write something on this Tragedy. Let us pray for everyone here on Earth too.

Robert Nehls July 19, 2014 at 5:21 AM Such a horrible way for those people to die. Your thoughts are well received and thought provoking. The world would be completely changed if there was no more hate. the Lord is the final judge and all will be brought to justice. Very well written, Lucilla.... Robert. Lucilla Carrillo July 19, 2014 at 9:58 AM Thank you Robert for your nice comment glad you liked it.

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