A Place They Call Utopia

As we approach a certain age 
Before the end draws nigh
Afore my knees give up the ghost
Or bunions stop me climbing high

When all I eat is jam on toast
Now is it time to make the most
To maybe write a bucket list
Of all the things I might have missed

Like jumping from an airplane
Too risky, that’s insane

Or swimming with a shark or two
Is something I would never do

To teeter on a tightrope above a high abyss
Would be crazy I have vertigo
So think I’ll give this one a miss

To bungee jump from way up high
Please have the medics standing by

My bucket list abundant
Making sharks or two redundant
With adventures unfulfilled 
That I do not want to miss

Like a day trip to the Moon
Wishing this could happen soon

Set sail upon a Galleon
In search of Paradise

To discover Shangri-La
Or a place they call Utopia

Oh dear, I think I’ve lost the plot
I‘m sounding even dopier 
I can’t believe I’m dreaming of a place they call Utopia

Returning to reality 
I make myself a pot of tea
For I don’t need a bucket list
As there is nothing I have missed

Contest Strand no 710
Sponsor Brian Strand
1st Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 3/30/2020 12:35:00 AM
Ann, welcome back from your brief daydream about Utopia! I was charmed by this - very fun, and congrats on your #1 ~ John
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/30/2020 4:23:00 AM
So happy you enjoyed it John and thank you so much for your lovely comments. Take care and keep well my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/29/2020 12:34:00 PM
Ann, your humor and your wit just ooze from this delightful poem! Thank you for the grin! Congratulations on your top win!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/30/2020 4:27:00 AM
Wow, such lovely words of encouragement Sam, and I am so pleased to bring a grin in these very surreal times. Thank you so much dear friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/29/2020 10:43:00 AM
Ann beautiful! Congrats on your top win!;)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/30/2020 4:28:00 AM
Bless you dear Brenda and please keep safe and well. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/29/2020 8:36:00 AM
Congrats on your win and a wonderful poem Thank you for sharing JC Hawkens
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Date: 3/30/2020 4:29:00 AM
How lovely to meet you JC and many thanks for your lovely comments. Keep safe and well my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 10/10/2018 1:01:00 AM
My eldest daughter is the only person I know who has an actual bucket list and is ticking things off in a methodical way; I, like you, do not want to swim with sharks, bungee jump, or jump out of an airplane. This poem related to me in all ways, but the last line totally agrees with me.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/10/2018 1:42:00 AM
Morning Caren, thanks so much. Yes I wonder who these people are that suddenly feel the need to put themselves in danger. My daughter in law wants to wing walk, haha! Enjoy your day Caren, have a safe and beautiful one Ann xx
Date: 10/9/2018 3:08:00 PM
Really nicely done Ann. This was fun to read. What a wonderful poetic adventure you have taken me on.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/9/2018 6:44:00 PM
Many thanks Chris for your kind comments, which are really appreciated. It was fun to write! Sweet dreams, Ann x
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