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A Place Not Meant To Be: 05

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Poetic Form: Crown of Sonnets: Italian or Petrachan
Inspired: 2024 February 08
Image: N/A
#5: The Morning After Shifting affects all their pulled souls; constant, seized stares engage dawning crystals; bred views. Child-like cherubs guide giggling stars; enchant, Pegasus prepped and harnessed; controlled crews, sprawled winged bats whorl descends barricaded, midnight submerged shades Admiral cool blues. Swamp aroused, croaks, leaps, buzzes, and waded, Luna merged descension, picturesque views, a deserved tired town, abandoned lagoon, cows standing in their beds as the grass grows, a milkman's leaving whistles a suite tune, farm life kickers, kitchens light flicker glows. Cherubs hook up the small wagon and hold, as Sol draws the reigns; Chariot of Gold.

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Date: 2/8/2024 2:37:00 PM
I enjoyed this reading, Awesome Work
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Date: 2/8/2024 2:44:00 PM
A heartyy thanks, Carlene. Aloha, William

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