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Poetic Form: Crown of Sonnets: Italian or Petrachan
Inspired: 2024 February 06
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#3: Tis Twilight Time Goal hour is here ... the spirit joins the soul, ephemeral or twilight ... or two worlds, dreams; exchange facts for fiction ... a black hole, furtherance, lying on a bed of pearls. The Ancient Mariner, sailed all seven, --but know that all of creation matters, Jules Verne starts your voyage, you'll break even, the journey will seem endless ... but crackers! The choices lay at your feet, just explore, "Around...," "Center...," "Under...," "Mysterious...," most productive voyager--go ashore. This would be the trice of time, serious, for the twinkling has arrived, tis Twilight, Time, inspired, now expired, on-site, sit tight.

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Date: 2/6/2024 5:09:00 AM
wow! Your latest poem was captivating for sure! I appreciate your references to Rhyme of the Ancient Mariner, Jules Verne and traveling the Seven Seas. The Odyssey is concluding...time to come ashore! Powerful stuff! This poem is a masterpiece in my book. Am faving it with respect for your creativity and strength, Sara
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Date: 2/6/2024 7:05:00 AM
Faithful you are, Sara. I am returning back to the writers aspects prior to my medical challenge--glad to be back. HEARTY thanks, my friend. Aloha, William

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