A Place In the Sun

A cosmos packed of wondrous miracles sowed

Precious creations on it leave us awed
Like the sun with its own place in the making
Are appertained to the almighty's molding
Cold if not for the light after dark
Emerge the sun shining high and stark

If it not represent the good in mankind
Never will the evil seem dark and blind

There is a place in the sun's domain
House the blessings of God within 
Emanating its radiance on creatures to calm

Solace it brings with a caress so warm
Unto all from the loving divine
Never once does he forsake his shrine.

© Nadiya (19 Jan '15)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/5/2015 2:10:00 AM
G'day Nadiya... Your poem is particularly good Nadiya and I must say I'm impressed with how interacted the title. Well done. Lindsay
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Date: 2/5/2015 2:42:00 AM
Thank you Lindsay for your supportive words... pleased that you have read my poems... Good day to you... nad!
Date: 1/24/2015 8:24:00 AM
Wonderful solace and imagery. He shines for us all... SKAT
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Date: 1/24/2015 8:51:00 AM
Thank you skat a...
Date: 1/24/2015 8:24:00 AM
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Date: 1/22/2015 9:28:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem, Nadiya. So very inspirational and well-written in a difficult form. Best wishes for your success in the contest. Sandra
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Date: 1/22/2015 11:52:00 PM
Thank you very much Sandra... your comments are very encouraging.
Date: 1/22/2015 1:07:00 PM
Stunning, dear Nadiya!.... Always a fan... Arlene
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Date: 1/22/2015 1:28:00 PM
Thank you Arlene... your comments are pleasant and so are your poems... hugs, nad!
Date: 1/19/2015 7:21:00 PM
Your poem shines with all the brilliance of the Sun. You do well to give honor to God.
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Date: 1/20/2015 12:27:00 AM
Thank you Richard... again, your words are encouraging ... be blessed.. nad!
Date: 1/19/2015 5:22:00 PM
This is a simply beautiful write my friend, I could feel the rays of the suns warmth, and the divine love of gods fingertips gently washing over my essences of humanity, cheri, thank you for your comments on my broken doll poem, I appricate your caring words, cheri
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Date: 1/20/2015 12:26:00 AM
Sun is a strong sign of God's presence... thank you for the visit and comment... i really enjoyed your poem... hugs, nad!
Date: 1/19/2015 1:40:00 PM
Beautiful write! The sun is a favorite theme of mine. You have done it justice. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/19/2015 2:02:00 PM
Thank you Eileen for the visit.
Date: 1/19/2015 11:18:00 AM
Your feelings come out strong and real, giving your work depth and believability. Emile.
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Date: 1/19/2015 11:54:00 AM
Thank you Emile for the encouraging comment... nad!
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