A Place

A Place A place so *****, perplexed, and small, Life it holds with no life at all. No ground it has yet does not fall, Just a lonesome floating ball, From beginning to end it can recall. A Mystery in the atmosphere This place it holds although unclear. For only inside will it reveal, A smile a laugh a tear or fear, Life, someone has placed it here. By Daniel Ray Green

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/30/2015 3:06:00 PM

Hi Daniel, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 9/30/2015 11:10:00 AM

Daniel, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT