A Pipe Dream

just
beyond
his compass
ambitions lay
buried deep within long forgotten dreams;
then
the band
started up,
and he awoke-
seizing his chance,re-joined life's merry dance
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mister Roboto Avatar
June 17, 2011 at 9:55 PM
im diGGin this rhyme my bruthuh! kinda reminds me of my favorite movie: Slingblade! when ole' Dwight Yokum gets the fellas in the band to come over for whiskey and aweful music, then he gets belligerent drunk and tosses the boys off his property! only in the south baby! woo-hoo. (i live in s.c:( ) -
Hendricks Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 3:52 PM
Life is indeed a merry dance. Nice one, Brian. Good luck in the contest. :))
A  Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 3:32 AM
excellent tetracty brian *luv skat
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