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A Pipe Dream

just beyond his compass ambitions lay buried deep within long forgotten dreams; then the band started up, and he awoke- seizing his chance,re-joined life's merry dance

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Date: 6/17/2011 9:55:00 PM
im diGGin this rhyme my bruthuh! kinda reminds me of my favorite movie: Slingblade! when ole' Dwight Yokum gets the fellas in the band to come over for whiskey and aweful music, then he gets belligerent drunk and tosses the boys off his property! only in the south baby! woo-hoo. (i live in s.c:( ) -
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Date: 6/15/2011 3:52:00 PM
Life is indeed a merry dance. Nice one, Brian. Good luck in the contest. :))
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Date: 6/15/2011 3:32:00 AM
excellent tetracty brian *luv skat
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