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A Pink Crystal Dawn

beneath the silence of ice-encased trees the sky’s pink dawn lies captured in the pond’s crystal depths/center>

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/14/2018 8:24:00 PM
Beautiful and well crafted write , but it looks like you have an extra; /center> at the end of your poem..Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/9/2018 1:14:00 PM
Very evocative poem, Andrea. Love the snow globe quality of this exquisite poem. Love and joy always.
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Date: 10/5/2016 4:40:00 PM
In < ten lines you have created magic with this winner…Way to go poet friend..Congrats on you being in the winners’ list..Sara
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Date: 10/5/2016 8:38:00 AM
Lovely write and win ...Congrats
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Date: 9/25/2013 8:53:00 PM
I enjoyed the poem. But I'm not familiar with the form.
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Date: 7/21/2013 4:22:00 AM
sensual poem lovely congrats on win Shadow x smiles
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Date: 7/20/2013 10:00:00 AM
Congrats on your win, my friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/20/2013 5:20:00 AM
Lovely piece,Andrea..Congrats on your win...
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Date: 7/20/2013 12:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Andy love xx
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Date: 7/19/2013 9:11:00 PM
ANDREA, . CONGRATS <3 SKAT
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Date: 7/19/2013 8:30:00 PM
ANDREA, , thank you for supporting my contest... CONGRATULATIONS.... :-) :-) :-) LINDA
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Date: 6/8/2013 2:26:00 PM
I don t know how i ve missed this beauty.I thought i ve seen it before but i didn t.Hubby is at work now and Christina is sleeping.Its 10.30pmhere and im reading some beautiful pietry tonight
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Date: 4/7/2013 8:30:00 PM
Twenty three syllables of neat and unadulterated beauty. - Red,
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Date: 3/10/2013 12:32:00 PM
This is just beautiful :-) Gorgeous imagery! I had no idea what Kimo Poetry was until now and this seems like a very well thought out example. Thanks for sharing...Love Ruby xx
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Date: 2/27/2013 1:16:00 PM
Beautiful Andrea! Congrats. A well deserved win!
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Date: 2/25/2013 5:17:00 PM
Nice one Andrea and I see it was a win -congrats-love phyl
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Date: 2/19/2013 3:28:00 PM
So happy to see my favorite, win the top spot Andrea. I know how much thought you put into creating your poetry and it shows. You are tops in entering contests and that really takes dedication. CONGRATULATIONS on your first place! I see you already took some other top honors. Well l need to do household chores on my day off, but in case l can't get to your other winning poems to congratulate you, l wanted to let you know l saw your First place impressive wins too. Kudos on all of them!!!
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Date: 2/18/2013 12:20:00 AM
One Kimo from you is worth 10 of mine..lol. congrats dear..BG
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Date: 2/17/2013 7:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! I love Kimo's. This one you can visualize..It's beautiful! Thanks for your comments on our poem "A Longing." It was David's idea to help me start writing again. I didn't give him any ideas...he just knows me. I think it flows perfectly and the couplets just melt. I'm very lucky...And, so are you! You are so talented...thanks for your comments..xx Holly Moore
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Date: 2/17/2013 5:43:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your TOP win in Rick's contest!!I loved this Kimo on my first read.
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Date: 2/17/2013 2:07:00 AM
a sure winning piece,congratulations Andrea....
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Date: 2/16/2013 11:44:00 PM
Biggest congratulations my dear friend for being on the top of the list again! Kudos! love always and forever, Leonora
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Date: 2/16/2013 11:39:00 PM
just love your poetry :)))..what a beautiful image u created
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Date: 2/16/2013 8:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win.
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Date: 2/16/2013 9:49:00 AM
This is just so lovely...delicate too !! Congrats on your win !!
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