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A Pink Crystal Dawn

beneath the silence of ice-encased trees

the sky’s pink dawn lies captured

in the pond’s crystal depths/center>

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/14/2018 8:24:00 PM

Beautiful and well crafted write , but it looks like you have an extra; /center> at the end of your poem..Hugs Eve

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 3/9/2018 1:14:00 PM

Very evocative poem, Andrea. Love the snow globe quality of this exquisite poem. Love and joy always.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/5/2016 4:40:00 PM

In < ten lines you have created magic with this winner…Way to go poet friend..Congrats on you being in the winners’ list..Sara

Joseph May

Date: 10/5/2016 8:38:00 AM

Lovely write and win ...Congrats

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 9/25/2013 8:53:00 PM

I enjoyed the poem. But I'm not familiar with the form.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/21/2013 4:22:00 AM

sensual poem lovely congrats on win Shadow x smiles

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/20/2013 10:00:00 AM

Congrats on your win, my friend. Loved always, bl

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 7/20/2013 5:20:00 AM

Lovely piece,Andrea..Congrats on your win...

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 7/20/2013 12:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning spot Andy love xx

Skat A

Date: 7/19/2013 9:11:00 PM

ANDREA, . CONGRATS <3 SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/19/2013 8:30:00 PM

ANDREA, , thank you for supporting my contest... CONGRATULATIONS.... :-) :-) :-) LINDA

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/8/2013 2:26:00 PM

I don t know how i ve missed this beauty.I thought i ve seen it before but i didn t.Hubby is at work now and Christina is sleeping.Its 10.30pmhere and im reading some beautiful pietry tonight

Red Omara

Date: 4/7/2013 8:30:00 PM

Twenty three syllables of neat and unadulterated beauty. - Red,

Ruby Honeytip

Date: 3/10/2013 12:32:00 PM

This is just beautiful :-) Gorgeous imagery! I had no idea what Kimo Poetry was until now and this seems like a very well thought out example. Thanks for sharing...Love Ruby xx

Tanya Harrington

Date: 2/27/2013 1:16:00 PM

Beautiful Andrea! Congrats. A well deserved win!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/25/2013 5:17:00 PM

Nice one Andrea and I see it was a win -congrats-love phyl

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/19/2013 3:28:00 PM

So happy to see my favorite, win the top spot Andrea. I know how much thought you put into creating your poetry and it shows. You are tops in entering contests and that really takes dedication. CONGRATULATIONS on your first place! I see you already took some other top honors. Well l need to do household chores on my day off, but in case l can't get to your other winning poems to congratulate you, l wanted to let you know l saw your First place impressive wins too. Kudos on all of them!!!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/18/2013 12:20:00 AM

One Kimo from you is worth 10 of mine..lol. congrats dear..BG

Holly Moore

Date: 2/17/2013 7:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! I love Kimo's. This one you can visualize..It's beautiful! Thanks for your comments on our poem "A Longing." It was David's idea to help me start writing again. I didn't give him any ideas...he just knows me. I think it flows perfectly and the couplets just melt. I'm very lucky...And, so are you! You are so talented...thanks for your comments..xx Holly Moore