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A Pink Crystal Dawn

beneath the silence of ice-encased trees

the sky’s pink dawn lies captured

in the pond’s crystal depths/center>

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Eve Roper

July 14, 2018 at 8:24 PM

Beautiful and well crafted write , but it looks like you have an extra; /center> at the end of your poem..Hugs Eve

Freddie Robinson Jr.

March 9, 2018 at 1:14 PM

Very evocative poem, Andrea. Love the snow globe quality of this exquisite poem. Love and joy always.

Sara Kendrick

October 5, 2016 at 4:40 PM

In < ten lines you have created magic with this winner…Way to go poet friend..Congrats on you being in the winners’ list..Sara

Joseph May

October 5, 2016 at 8:38 AM

Lovely write and win ...Congrats

Jon A Cavanaugh

September 25, 2013 at 8:53 PM

I enjoyed the poem. But I'm not familiar with the form.

Shadow Hamilton

July 21, 2013 at 4:22 AM

sensual poem lovely congrats on win Shadow x smiles

Bl Devnath

July 20, 2013 at 10:00 AM

Congrats on your win, my friend. Loved always, bl

Olusegun Arowolo

July 20, 2013 at 5:20 AM

Lovely piece,Andrea..Congrats on your win...

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

July 20, 2013 at 12:35 AM

Congratulations on your winning spot Andy love xx

Skat A

July 19, 2013 at 9:11 PM

ANDREA, . CONGRATS <3 SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

July 19, 2013 at 8:30 PM

ANDREA, , thank you for supporting my contest... CONGRATULATIONS.... :-) :-) :-) LINDA

Charmaine Chircop

June 8, 2013 at 2:26 PM

I don t know how i ve missed this beauty.I thought i ve seen it before but i didn t.Hubby is at work now and Christina is sleeping.Its 10.30pmhere and im reading some beautiful pietry tonight

Red Omara

April 7, 2013 at 8:30 PM

Twenty three syllables of neat and unadulterated beauty. - Red,

Ruby Honeytip

March 10, 2013 at 12:32 PM

This is just beautiful :-) Gorgeous imagery! I had no idea what Kimo Poetry was until now and this seems like a very well thought out example. Thanks for sharing...Love Ruby xx

Tanya Harrington

February 27, 2013 at 1:16 PM

Beautiful Andrea! Congrats. A well deserved win!

Phyllis Babcock

February 25, 2013 at 5:17 PM

Nice one Andrea and I see it was a win -congrats-love phyl

Connie Marcum Wong

February 19, 2013 at 3:28 PM

So happy to see my favorite, win the top spot Andrea. I know how much thought you put into creating your poetry and it shows. You are tops in entering contests and that really takes dedication. CONGRATULATIONS on your first place! I see you already took some other top honors. Well l need to do household chores on my day off, but in case l can't get to your other winning poems to congratulate you, l wanted to let you know l saw your First place impressive wins too. Kudos on all of them!!!

Barbara Gorelick

February 18, 2013 at 12:20 AM

One Kimo from you is worth 10 of mine..lol. congrats dear..BG

Holly Moore

February 17, 2013 at 7:43 AM

Congratulations on your win! I love Kimo's. This one you can visualize..It's beautiful! Thanks for your comments on our poem "A Longing." It was David's idea to help me start writing again. I didn't give him any ideas...he just knows me. I think it flows perfectly and the couplets just melt. I'm very lucky...And, so are you! You are so talented...thanks for your comments..xx Holly Moore