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A Pinch

A quick Sharp Pain in a vein Barely notice it Blood is drawn Rushing from the vein It feels unnatural Leaving from your vein But the pain is unnoticeable as more leaves A feeling of faint The one drawing the blood gives a kind look with their eyes Taking more blood worry sets in Skin becomes ashen vision blurs More blood is drawn To tight in a grip Body goes limp What caused the minor pain leaves the vein Two slow breaths Ashen Cold Dead Too much blood was

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Date: 11/9/2018 3:35:00 AM
The ending is classic!
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