A Pillow of Golden Thread

Upon a pillow of golden thread A fairy princess laid her head. Dreaming of love, it is said, Sweeter than nectar’s drop Her royal thoughts fed. By golden thread Magical Lonely Bed She Awoke Joy singing, Inside her head “Bring my love,” her plea. Two entwined; magical day. Embrace tomorrows’ happy play. Love on a pillow of golden thread.. FORM: Rhyming Double-Reverse Nonet Copyright 10/10/14 By Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

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Tim Smith

Date: 10/11/2014 12:41:00 PM

This is simply marvelous...the flow, the content, the challenge of the double-reverse...very well done Dane...hugs Tim

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 10/13/2014 8:09:00 PM

Thank you, Tim, very much. Smiles, Dane Amm

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/11/2014 3:32:00 AM

You never believe it.. I just mentionef you yestetday in a comment,re the collabs between soupers you used to organize.It was fun! So.happy to see you here my dear Dany,and how are you?What a beautiful poem you shared.Wish you re back for good .

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 10/13/2014 8:08:00 PM

Yes, I remember how much fun they were. Maybe we'll do it again before too long. :D