A Pill Fits the Bill

Mama eagle’s dear chickies were ill,
so she told them to lie very still.
“You just wait here for me,”
she said most tenderly.
Then she flew off to get them a pill.

Baby eagles, like most kids, detest
taking pills. Mom returned to the nest
with dead mice in her bill
which concealed the crushed pill
Doctor Stork had prescribed with good rest!

For Brian Strand's the 'ALL YOURS(Jun 5)' Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/1/2014 9:03:00 AM
Andrea Such a cute and clever write. Puts a smile on the readers face and a chuckle in their heart. Thank you for the silly comment on my Shower poem. Hugs
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Date: 10/28/2013 11:43:00 PM
Love this story and Dr Stork. When I was a child I had a book called Dr Goat. I loved that book. Great poem here.
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Date: 9/16/2012 3:53:00 AM
Oh this is clever, reminds me of when our dog was ill, having to put the pill inside her meat... love this...
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Date: 8/12/2011 8:45:00 PM
Love the dead mouse thing Andrea, you do have great imagination! Great story.
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Date: 8/7/2011 7:11:00 PM
Cute one..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 8/5/2011 5:02:00 PM
Your imagination flies above the fray. Your cute little ditty lightened up my day. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/4/2011 10:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 8/4/2011 1:38:00 PM
Andrea, Great write, Loved it , congratulations on your worthy poem's presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/4/2011 10:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Pure Thoughts On Nature" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2011 8:57:00 AM
congaratulations on all your recent wins. i thought this one was very creative :) i'm glad it won!
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Date: 8/3/2011 7:29:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on a stellar win with this stunning poetry my friend..enjoy with luv..
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Date: 8/3/2011 7:00:00 PM
whoot, andie..cheery congrats on your splendid win! : ) huggs!
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Date: 8/2/2011 3:37:00 PM
This is cute Andrea. Sounds like something you would tell your grandchildren. A nice little story. love Phyl
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Date: 8/1/2011 1:41:00 PM
This is great for a childrens book my friend. Wonderful imagery. Really liked it. Should be a winner for sure. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/30/2011 11:45:00 AM
Well this sure was creative! I wasn't expecting that when I read your title-- such a cute take on "bill" as in beak" -- very nice, you got me with this, sweetie :) haha I hope the mice were enough to cover up the bad taste of the pills ;) hugs to you
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Date: 7/30/2011 4:01:00 AM
cute stuff. Is it an opiate?:)
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Date: 7/29/2011 9:24:00 PM
hahahah, enjoyed tghe humor and wit, andrea
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Date: 7/29/2011 5:36:00 PM
a creative shift here, andie... such a darling of a write that is spellbinding, to say the least.. winning luck; whoot, ctie birds! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/29/2011 4:14:00 PM
The stork is a dork. Everyone knows that storks attend to human babies. I am amazed at your skill in writing limericks. Good imagination is the reason. Luck in the contest. Love, daver
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Date: 7/29/2011 4:07:00 PM
ha! a funny take on the picture. dr. stork - very clever :) i have no idea what to write.
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Date: 7/29/2011 2:57:00 PM
Haha this is really very funny write Andrea.Enjoyed very much.Best wishes:)
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Date: 7/29/2011 2:11:00 PM
love this witty entry of yours for the contest Andrea, wishing you all the best with it! ;) Quick soupmail lfde Wilma
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Date: 7/29/2011 2:11:00 PM
Very witty, Andrea. Unique take on the photo! Best wishes in John's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/29/2011 2:09:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your poetry today Andrea. It was a pleasure to read and I wish you the best in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend and keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/29/2011 1:07:00 PM
LOL, I love the idea of Dr Stork - I can see him with his stethoscope round his neck : )
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