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A Pilgrimage

This is where I belong A moment in time I was once a pilgrim Searching for a home Travelling through the roads Not knowing my way With time, my heart knew The direction I was to follow It has brought me To an end, to the place I call my home, my mecca.

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Laura Mckenzie

Date: 4/15/2009 2:10:00 PM

Congratulations on your terrific poem being featured! Laura :)

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/15/2009 10:34:00 AM

Congrats with your feature Reem, wonderful work...Raul

Dima N.

Date: 4/15/2009 6:02:00 AM

Beautiful...what an amazing feeling it is :) Congrats on being featured and Thank you for your comments on my poem,Mom. God Bless, Dima

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/14/2009 2:08:00 PM

I'm glad you have found yur meca. It is a beautiful place to life....with peace, love, and contentment. This is a very nice poem. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week.

Date: 4/13/2009 4:37:00 PM

Thank you for sharing this uplifting view with us. Enjoyed this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Just wanted to add this to my other comment. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/13/2009 6:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more featured in the future. Love, Carol

Aleera De La Keur

Date: 4/13/2009 6:31:00 AM

Congratulations on being featured this week, well written....Aleera

Date: 8/18/2008 11:55:00 AM

Interesting reflection. The title is fitting. You may want to classify this as free verse. According to the policy, the staff doesn't read poems that are classified as I do not know. I enjoyed this one. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing. Karen