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A Piece of Paradise 8x8

Auburn trees meander through the pines On the hill where beauty intertwines Distant mountains crested with snow, Shine a piece of paradise glow The sight is contrast filled with hope Miles of trees to a mountain slope I dream of the journey to take With you to paradise, we make 11/9/18 *Entry for 8x8 poetry contest. Sponsor: P.S. Awtry 8 Lines. 8 Syllables.

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Date: 11/14/2018 2:20:00 PM
You have painted a beautiful picture with your lovely words.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/14/2018 2:49:00 PM
Thank you P.S. I appreciate it :)
Date: 11/13/2018 8:51:00 AM
You must live in a very beautiful place to be inspired so by nature!! To be able to see hope as big as the mountains feels good to read! Good Luck in the contest with this lovely piece xxoo Happy Tuesday!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/13/2018 9:01:00 AM
Hi Mike. Yes, it is certainly beautiful here. I am grateful. Thank you very much. Happy Tuesday ! :)
Date: 11/11/2018 6:35:00 PM
Another beautiful verse. A winner, I think. Good luck, Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/11/2018 6:45:00 PM
Thank you very much Sandra :)
Date: 11/9/2018 6:23:00 PM
Beautiful imagery Heidi..Gl in the contest..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/9/2018 7:28:00 PM
Thanks so much. I appreciate your comment and support :)
Date: 11/9/2018 4:09:00 PM
A scenic and pleasant journey to paradise..best for a win, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/9/2018 4:35:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay :)
Date: 11/9/2018 3:19:00 PM
Lovely verse Heidi, you're lucky to have the mountains to inspire you. Good luck. Tom.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/9/2018 3:20:00 PM
Thank you so much Tom :)

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