A Piece of Nothing

As when I thought I stand out
and looked the people beyond,
I thought I saw admiration
with every tears that flown.

Just when everybody looked up to me
with envy within their soul,
I'm everything nobosy can't be
that's what i see in me

Cause I'm all alone in misery
and thought I'm sure  brave enough
to face the world with no one else
but myself to depend.

All along there's no one there
I can dedicate my success with
Now I'm awake with my foolish dream
that I have everything...

for in reality I have a piece of nothing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Agustin Avatar
December 11, 2024 at 9:42 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 9:31 PM
lovely barredo, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 9:34 PM
Lovely B, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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