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A Piece of Nothing

As when I thought I stand out and looked the people beyond, I thought I saw admiration with every tears that flown. Just when everybody looked up to me with envy within their soul, I'm everything nobosy can't be that's what i see in me Cause I'm all alone in misery and thought I'm sure brave enough to face the world with no one else but myself to depend. All along there's no one there I can dedicate my success with Now I'm awake with my foolish dream that I have everything... for in reality I have a piece of nothing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 12/11/2024 9:42:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/21/2016 9:31:00 PM
lovely barredo, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/15/2016 9:34:00 PM
Lovely B, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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