A Piece of My Heart

Here today gone tomorrow
I didnt get to say goodbye
I miss you so much
I could just cry
Everyday I try to hang on
to all the memories
of you being my brother
of me being your sissy
It's hard to believe that someone 
would take you away
from everyone you loved
but God knows best
God in heaven above
The pain cuts so deep
deep within my soul
on that very day  you left me
my heart became froze...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/24/2011 12:15:00 PM
A heartfelt and touching write. It is always painful and difficult when a loved one dies, especially if it is sudden and unexpected. Thanks for sharing. Regards, Robert.
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Andrea Baker
Date: 5/24/2011 6:32:00 PM
Thanks alot:)
Date: 5/24/2011 10:27:00 AM
Did your brother pass away Andrea. I'm sorry for your loss. There are times when I don't understand how young lives are cut short. Your poem is heartbreaking and very well written. Best to you, Diane
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Andrea Baker
Date: 5/24/2011 10:31:00 AM
Aww thank you.. Yes he was killed May 5th,2011. Thanks a lot for reading my poem. It means a lot ! Thanks for showing love With Love, Andrea
Date: 5/24/2011 8:42:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your amazing creative poetry ... hope u have fun on PS as u continue to share with luv..
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Andrea Baker
Date: 5/24/2011 9:41:00 AM
Hello.. Thank you for showing love to my poetry. I will do the same for you also:) Much Love Andrea
Date: 5/24/2011 7:31:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. It was a very interesting write. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today Andrea. Love, Carol
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Andrea Baker
Date: 5/24/2011 9:42:00 AM
Thanks a lot Carol that means alot:) God Bless, Andrea
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