A Piece of Heaven

Silent midnight, crescent moon overhead
Molten silver shimmered on dewy grass
Tender jasmine and vibrant marigold
Danced with the gentle breeze
As softly it caressed my sleepy cheeks
Resting on his warm loving shoulder
10/09/2011

By Tahera Mannan
For Constance’s “ Six Lines Of Poetry, Please” contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Seraphin Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 8:15 AM
* Ps. * “Tis A Fave Amid Beauties Masterpiece.” *
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November 6, 2011 at 8:10 AM
* “Yessss * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Tahera * Thoughts Came About Once More * I Felt Fire Rushing Through My Veins * `Midnight Fantasies` * Burning Amid Flames of Deep Love * I Would Surely Likened Its Pleasantries Unto This Beautifully Soft Pastel Moment Which * Your Lovely Beauty * Has Brushed Sooo Brilliantly * Tis I Who's Day Was Made * Both By Your Visit & This Glorious Treasure * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *
Dietrich Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 9:17 PM
and this is a gorgeous little piece of heaven that you have created RIGHT here.
Mehta Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 8:49 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of constance, Tahera
Sweetheart Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 3:37 PM
CONGRATS TAHERA ON THIRD PLACE WITH THIS SPECTACULAR WRITE AND ENTRY MY FRIEND.. SO HONORED TO BE SHARING WITH U LUV...
Horne Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 10:31 AM
My apologies for missing so many contest results - many congrats on all your wins : )
Quigley Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 10:13 AM
Very nicely written Tahera. Congratulations on your win.
Taylor Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 9:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Tahera. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph
Brown Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 8:04 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Six Lines Of Poetry, Please" contest Tahera. Love,Carol
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September 10, 2011 at 8:31 AM
Beautiful images dance in each line so well in tune.... Best wishes in contest... Michael
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September 10, 2011 at 2:53 AM
Wonderful imagery here Tahera...love this beautiful poem.Best wishes.
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