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A Piece of Heaven

Silent midnight, crescent moon overhead Molten silver shimmered on dewy grass Tender jasmine and vibrant marigold Danced with the gentle breeze As softly it caressed my sleepy cheeks Resting on his warm loving shoulder 10/09/2011 By Tahera Mannan For Constance’s “ Six Lines Of Poetry, Please” contest

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Date: 11/6/2011 8:15:00 AM
* Ps. * “Tis A Fave Amid Beauties Masterpiece.” *
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Date: 11/6/2011 8:10:00 AM
* “Yessss * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Tahera * Thoughts Came About Once More * I Felt Fire Rushing Through My Veins * `Midnight Fantasies` * Burning Amid Flames of Deep Love * I Would Surely Likened Its Pleasantries Unto This Beautifully Soft Pastel Moment Which * Your Lovely Beauty * Has Brushed Sooo Brilliantly * Tis I Who's Day Was Made * Both By Your Visit & This Glorious Treasure * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *
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Date: 9/15/2011 9:17:00 PM
and this is a gorgeous little piece of heaven that you have created RIGHT here.
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Date: 9/13/2011 8:49:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of constance, Tahera
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Date: 9/13/2011 3:37:00 PM
CONGRATS TAHERA ON THIRD PLACE WITH THIS SPECTACULAR WRITE AND ENTRY MY FRIEND.. SO HONORED TO BE SHARING WITH U LUV...
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Date: 9/13/2011 10:31:00 AM
My apologies for missing so many contest results - many congrats on all your wins : )
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Date: 9/13/2011 10:13:00 AM
Very nicely written Tahera. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/13/2011 9:00:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Tahera. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 9/13/2011 8:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Six Lines Of Poetry, Please" contest Tahera. Love,Carol
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Date: 9/10/2011 8:31:00 AM
Beautiful images dance in each line so well in tune.... Best wishes in contest... Michael
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Date: 9/10/2011 2:53:00 AM
Wonderful imagery here Tahera...love this beautiful poem.Best wishes.
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