A Piece of Dream

I look behind to see my dream has shattered
into a million pieces on the floor
I knew that this was going to happen
but didn't know it would hurt much more

It was the only way this dream should end
it wasn't one that had a hope
it's better off in a million pieces
I'm just not sure how to cope

I know that I must now recover
and learn to build my dreams again
I just need to build them better
and make them those I can attain

I know the hurting will continue
for a time at least
but from my dream that lies here shattered
I'll take from it one piece

It's something that I'll carry forward
into my new dream I must take
for it's the thought of possibilities 
this piece of dream did wake

But it's the image my dream created
is that which hurts the more
I think it's this that lies in tatters 
strewn across the floor.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Horsman Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 8:32 AM
Hi Emma, thanks for your comment on my poem. having done so makes me want to go back and look at your first poem on soup. this is a wonderful poem, although very sad, i just love it profoundness knowing it's from the heart. harry
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June 2, 2011 at 1:06 AM
Emma, congratulations on your win in Pd's contest :) WN
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June 2, 2011 at 12:48 AM
grats on your awesome contest entry Luv*Skat
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June 1, 2011 at 12:25 PM
Congrats Emma on your win in pd's contest with this wonderful first poem on soup. love, gautami
Horne Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 8:07 AM
Many congrats, Emma : )
Taylor Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 7:29 AM
Congrats on your win, Emma. Nice going. xxxRalph
Mehta Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 7:11 AM
Congfgratulations on the win in the contest of p.d. Emma
Brown Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 5:53 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in P.D.'s contest Emma. Love, Carol
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June 1, 2011 at 12:20 AM
Emma!~ CONGRATULATIONS!! In my contest, and thank you for supporting my contest. I had a great time reading and judging every entry in my contest. Thanks for being among all my chosen winners. have a great one,.. Poet D
Sweetheart Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 9:33 PM
Congrats Emma on your excellent win tonight in this contest.. enjoy luv..
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March 19, 2011 at 2:21 PM
Very Well done Emma! Congrats! Steve
Brown Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 6:26 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured on PoetrySoup this week Emma. Love, Carol
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March 1, 2011 at 4:49 PM
Congrats on your featured quatrain. Vince
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March 1, 2011 at 2:45 AM
Congrats on the feature. A well written poem! I love the last stanza. N :)
Castro Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 8:29 PM
emma congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you're featured on the soup web site!!!!!
Tacito Avatar
February 16, 2011 at 5:34 AM
Many, if not all, have experienced such a crushing blow. I, too, know this. The key words in this piece thru the sadness: "Carry Forward". Well done.
Mehta Avatar
February 16, 2011 at 5:32 AM
very thoughtful and enjoyable write on a piece of dream, Emma
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