A Piece of Dream

I look behind to see my dream has shattered
into a million pieces on the floor
I knew that this was going to happen
but didn't know it would hurt much more

It was the only way this dream should end
it wasn't one that had a hope
it's better off in a million pieces
I'm just not sure how to cope

I know that I must now recover
and learn to build my dreams again
I just need to build them better
and make them those I can attain

I know the hurting will continue
for a time at least
but from my dream that lies here shattered
I'll take from it one piece

It's something that I'll carry forward
into my new dream I must take
for it's the thought of possibilities 
this piece of dream did wake

But it's the image my dream created
is that which hurts the more
I think it's this that lies in tatters 
strewn across the floor.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/16/2012 8:32:00 AM
Hi Emma, thanks for your comment on my poem. having done so makes me want to go back and look at your first poem on soup. this is a wonderful poem, although very sad, i just love it profoundness knowing it's from the heart. harry
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Date: 6/2/2011 1:06:00 AM
Emma, congratulations on your win in Pd's contest :) WN
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Date: 6/2/2011 12:48:00 AM
grats on your awesome contest entry Luv*Skat
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Date: 6/1/2011 12:25:00 PM
Congrats Emma on your win in pd's contest with this wonderful first poem on soup. love, gautami
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Date: 6/1/2011 8:07:00 AM
Many congrats, Emma : )
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Date: 6/1/2011 7:29:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Emma. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 6/1/2011 7:11:00 AM
Congfgratulations on the win in the contest of p.d. Emma
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Date: 6/1/2011 5:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in P.D.'s contest Emma. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/1/2011 12:20:00 AM
Emma!~ CONGRATULATIONS!! In my contest, and thank you for supporting my contest. I had a great time reading and judging every entry in my contest. Thanks for being among all my chosen winners. have a great one,.. Poet D
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Date: 5/31/2011 9:33:00 PM
Congrats Emma on your excellent win tonight in this contest.. enjoy luv..
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Date: 3/19/2011 2:21:00 PM
Very Well done Emma! Congrats! Steve
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Date: 3/2/2011 6:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured on PoetrySoup this week Emma. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/1/2011 4:49:00 PM
Congrats on your featured quatrain. Vince
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Date: 3/1/2011 2:45:00 AM
Congrats on the feature. A well written poem! I love the last stanza. N :)
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Date: 2/27/2011 8:29:00 PM
emma congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you're featured on the soup web site!!!!!
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Date: 2/16/2011 5:34:00 AM
Many, if not all, have experienced such a crushing blow. I, too, know this. The key words in this piece thru the sadness: "Carry Forward". Well done.
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Date: 2/16/2011 5:32:00 AM
very thoughtful and enjoyable write on a piece of dream, Emma
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