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A Piece of Bread Please ( Take 2 )

Dollars  always  help .

  But  the  parched  earth  always  wins .

  More  than  dough  required .


 

  Inspired by Sami's "piece of bread" , contest .

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David Byrne

December 21, 2009 at 6:08 PM

Where there's muck there's luck! Clever I like it!

Elaine George

October 15, 2009 at 9:23 AM

Very creataive! Sean. Lainie

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

August 16, 2009 at 12:44 PM

Now that's good, Sean. (Thanks for the writing fun, too!)

Sue Mason

July 31, 2009 at 9:14 AM

Haven't checked out the new contest list ... this one looks like fun ... you've got a winner with this LOL write ... a sign ($$) of our times for sure ...