A Piece of Bread.

My mother starts moaning, with another one due.
She won't live to see, as she struggles to wheeze.
I never knew famine would produce skies so blue.
But no need for toilets, I forget how to squeeze.

Searing sun inflates skulls into baroque balloons.
One whining dog, dying , from a surfeit of fleas.
I squint as my sister beats a roach with a spoon.
She's holding out hope, with a morsel to tease.

My eyes can still water from the feces and trash,
tossed up by vultures to release fresh disease.
I dig up what moist dirt I can pound into mash.
An old man collapses, not a single one grieves.

What passes for corpses- baking black as they pop.
Now the flies feel the heat and retreat to the trees.
My brother keeps wailing and I wish he would stop.
My breathing grows shallow in the oven fed breeze.

If it helps each of you,
I am down on my knees.
I beg you.
Hand me one piece of bread.
Would you, please?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/3/2010 2:01:00 PM
if i could say it again i will, my oppinion stands. JOHN HENRY LOVING III
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Date: 8/17/2009 3:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Sami's contest Gerard. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2009 9:01:00 AM
Powerful words, and well deserving win in Sami's contest! Congratulations!
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Date: 8/15/2009 8:21:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Sami's contest Gerard.Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/15/2009 7:41:00 AM
This piece shocked me. It was a lamantation as if it was from the bible it self. and it scared me because i knew that somewhere and in many places this was the absolute truth of the lives of some people. Your view was scarily realistic as if from a prophet. And the call that goes out to missionaries, real. Yes, I heard the voice of God and i was touched to my soul. Magnificant. and job well done. JOHN HENRY LOVING III
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Date: 8/13/2009 8:28:00 PM
Powerful and vivid imagery, well done in form also, Gerard, you hit the nail on the head with this poingant poem. ~Trudy~
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Date: 8/1/2009 7:27:00 AM
just as rotten as it is........the world allowing...apparently needing" this? The verse is excellent and on point I was speaking of stravation. Light and Love
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Date: 7/31/2009 5:40:00 PM
Very descriptive Quatrain. The plight of the worlds poor. Sara
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Date: 7/31/2009 2:25:00 PM
Gerald, what a powerful poem. You paint such a vivid picture from suffering child's point of view - a picture I have seen in the media but never up close. This made me feel it closer to home. Well done. Krista
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