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A Picnic With Pablo Neruda Premiere Contest Winner

Four legs quiver like clumsy cabrioles striking smooth gray rivers of zig-zag sidewalk barrios in rhythm with happy shivers syncopated on a muffled drum as we talk and stroll On our way hand-in-hand we persuade and pretend this day away taunting and cajoling to demand laughing “hide and seeking” chasing and skedaddling poking and peeking like cuddly pandas or canoodling otters splashing and clambering We roll and meander impetuously twiddling all the way atop gregarious green promenades we pause in slight delay as we prattle and prance as we dance to the Crickets singing nodding to their fiddling frolicking with all the jiggling Serendipitous stalks of snickering flowers pop to dazzle and razzle our wits we glide in stripes of candy bits of rainbows bright Purple painted paisley fragrantly flairs in pairs of scented lavender sweetness among black-eyed daisies dusting the woozy air in a meadow’s billowing bloom sunflowers sunbathe in costume We giddily tarry as we carry a feast of fancies and treats artsy bits of charmed delicacies filled with a peck of upcoming kisses enticing fantasies that wink Snuggling shenanigans lead us astray as we find our rootie-tootie hideaway hugs as we shy away from tomfoolery jesting to lay down and swoon looking up at the soon to be stars lingering for the coming of the moon Murmurs of Starlings gaggle their harmonies of chirps in cheeks and broadened beaks thrumming tiny melodies. Swallows sweep and woo fixated on this unabashed swain through songbird strains announcing a shrilling review broadening in sweet refrains “I love you…I love you” Fingerpainting the Monet sky puffy white cotton words appear from clouds passing by while tiny violins spin in the air piccolos peep pigeon-toed Doves coo and weep their contentedness to appease trailing off the pleasant breeze I fall upon my knees My words explode to strew like a thousand storms set free “I love you…I love you…I love you”

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Date: 5/8/2023 12:14:00 PM
Neruda is one of my favorite poets. Nice imaginations to write this poem. Kudos.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 5/11/2023 10:58:00 AM
Thanks Jay. Happy that you liked it. Lonna
Date: 5/8/2023 4:06:00 AM
See what you've done now Lonna? I'm wanting to read the poems of the guy who - by all accounts - is often referred to as the National poet of Chile! :) That wasn't in my plans this morning. but it is now. The power of your poetry. :) Cheers - Gary
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 5/11/2023 10:59:00 AM
Haha! Glad it stirred you to read this tremendous wordsmith's work. Thanks for your wonderfully fun comment. Lonna
Date: 5/7/2023 8:38:00 PM
This is brilliant... A date with the wonderful poet himself... Makes me remember the days... Congratulations...
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 5/11/2023 11:00:00 AM
Thank you Roger for your gracious comment! Lonna
Date: 5/7/2023 7:41:00 AM
Dear Lonna, I was held spellbound by the imagination and beauty of this fantastic poem. Each and every line offered a gem for my poetic heart to treasure. Vivid and vibrant and lyrical, the verses dance upon the page with exquisite imagery, metaphors and emotions. I adore this! A fav! Congratulations for your brilliant trophy win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 5/7/2023 5:27:00 PM
Susan I thank you so very much. And, So glad that you liked it. It was fun to write. It took a hop, skip and jump straight from my heart. Hugs. Lonna
Date: 5/7/2023 2:43:00 AM
Love this. Amazing writing. Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 5/7/2023 5:28:00 PM
Thank you Gina! I am blessed by your sweet comment. Hugs, Lonna

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