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A Picnic With Pablo Neruda Premiere Contest Winner

Four legs quiver
like clumsy cabrioles
striking smooth gray rivers
of zig-zag sidewalk barrios
in rhythm with happy shivers
syncopated on a muffled drum
as we talk and stroll

On our way
hand-in-hand
we persuade and pretend
this day away
taunting and cajoling to demand
laughing “hide and seeking”
chasing and skedaddling
poking and peeking
like cuddly pandas
or canoodling otters
splashing and clambering

We roll and meander
impetuously twiddling all the way
atop gregarious green promenades
we pause in slight delay
as we prattle and prance
as we dance to the Crickets singing
nodding to their fiddling
frolicking with all the jiggling

Serendipitous stalks
of snickering flowers pop
to dazzle and razzle our wits
we glide in stripes of candy bits
of rainbows bright

Purple painted paisley
fragrantly flairs in pairs
of scented lavender sweetness
among black-eyed daisies
dusting the woozy air
in a meadow’s billowing bloom
sunflowers sunbathe in costume

We giddily tarry
as we carry
a feast of fancies and treats
artsy bits of charmed delicacies
filled with a peck of upcoming kisses
enticing fantasies that wink

Snuggling shenanigans lead us astray
as we find our rootie-tootie hideaway
hugs as we shy away
from tomfoolery jesting
to lay down and swoon
looking up at the soon to be stars
lingering for the coming of the moon

Murmurs of Starlings
gaggle their harmonies
of chirps
in cheeks and broadened beaks
thrumming tiny melodies.

Swallows sweep and woo
fixated on this unabashed swain
through songbird strains
announcing a shrilling review
broadening in sweet refrains

“I love you…I love you”

Fingerpainting the Monet sky
puffy white cotton words appear
from clouds passing by
while tiny violins spin in the air
piccolos peep
pigeon-toed Doves coo and weep
their contentedness to appease
trailing off the pleasant breeze

I fall upon my knees

My words explode to strew
like a thousand storms set free

“I love you…I love you…I love you”

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Date: 5/8/2023 12:14:00 PM
Neruda is one of my favorite poets. Nice imaginations to write this poem. Kudos.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 5/11/2023 10:58:00 AM
Thanks Jay. Happy that you liked it. Lonna
Date: 5/8/2023 4:06:00 AM
See what you've done now Lonna? I'm wanting to read the poems of the guy who - by all accounts - is often referred to as the National poet of Chile! :) That wasn't in my plans this morning. but it is now. The power of your poetry. :) Cheers - Gary
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 5/11/2023 10:59:00 AM
Haha! Glad it stirred you to read this tremendous wordsmith's work. Thanks for your wonderfully fun comment. Lonna
Date: 5/7/2023 8:38:00 PM
This is brilliant... A date with the wonderful poet himself... Makes me remember the days... Congratulations...
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 5/11/2023 11:00:00 AM
Thank you Roger for your gracious comment! Lonna
Date: 5/7/2023 7:41:00 AM
Dear Lonna, I was held spellbound by the imagination and beauty of this fantastic poem. Each and every line offered a gem for my poetic heart to treasure. Vivid and vibrant and lyrical, the verses dance upon the page with exquisite imagery, metaphors and emotions. I adore this! A fav! Congratulations for your brilliant trophy win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 5/7/2023 5:27:00 PM
Susan I thank you so very much. And, So glad that you liked it. It was fun to write. It took a hop, skip and jump straight from my heart. Hugs. Lonna
Date: 5/7/2023 2:43:00 AM
Love this. Amazing writing. Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 5/7/2023 5:28:00 PM
Thank you Gina! I am blessed by your sweet comment. Hugs, Lonna

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