Krish Radhakrishna Poet Rhyme

A Pet Minuchu

He is our neighbour’s cat
every morning at coffee he waits at our door
on the mat

He looks at us 
and meows so we don’t ignore
the puss

his need
pet food some more!
feed

He is our neighbour’s cat
and meows so we don’t ignore
feed

2nd placement
written 15/04/2021
My pet Minuchu
Mohan Chutani sponsored
6,12,3 / 4,8,2, / 2,4,1/ 6,8,1 syllables with aba, cbc, dbd, abd rhyme

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Andrea Dietrich May 10, 2021 at 2:09 PM I love this one, Krish!! Congrats. Krish Radhakrishna May 30, 2021 at 1:58 AM Thanks Andrea

Christuraj Alex May 9, 2021 at 5:24 AM Very Nice! Krish Radhakrishna May 9, 2021 at 5:32 AM Thanks Chisturaj!

Joanna Daniel April 17, 2021 at 6:43 AM Ah! So he's your part-time pet, I should say, well written, Krish:) Krish Radhakrishna April 17, 2021 at 10:21 AM Thanks Jo! True story! The cat loves us and our food!:)

Darlene De Beaulieu April 15, 2021 at 12:26 PM Hello Krish, ah yes, you have a part time cat. Enjoy the cat. He or she lies you. Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu April 15, 2021 at 3:37 PM Hello Krish, yes a little bit of food and love. That is a very lucky cat. Cheers. Darlene Krish Radhakrishna April 15, 2021 at 1:01 PM Thanks Darlene! A little bit of food and love and nothing more! cheers Darlene!