Rama Balasubramanian Poet Rhyme

A Pet Minichu

" All dog owners should put a belt in their own neck, ask someone to hold it and go for walk at least once" Quote by Author

When we keep in house pet,
we forget they should have freedom, their need to breed
should be met

We imprison
pet in house, it's we must concede
prison

Wherein
our act, indeed
sin

When we keep In house pet,
pet in house, it's we must concede
sin

06.05.2021
Contest Name :A Pet Minichu
Sponsor	: Mohan Chutani
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Andrea Dietrich May 10, 2021 at 2:14 PM Good one, Rama. It's strange. OUr dog is a breed that supposedly is supposed to love being outside. But instead, he always wants to be inside with US. Even with his doggie door that takes him to a big back yard, he mostly just stays in our house! Rama Balasubramanian May 11, 2021 at 5:22 AM An introvert I suppose. Thanks for your wonderful comments. Take care, Rama

Christuraj Alex May 9, 2021 at 5:27 AM Real Observation! Written well. Rama Balasubramanian May 11, 2021 at 5:23 AM Thanks, Take care, God bless!

Darlene De Beaulieu May 6, 2021 at 12:16 PM Hello Rama, We can let our pets out in the yard to roam. As long as the gate is closed. We have to protect our pets from harm. Hugs Blessings Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu May 7, 2021 at 10:46 AM Hello Rama, yes some pets do become parents. But not all of them. Thank you fr the lovely comment. Take care. God Bless. Darlene. Rama Balasubramanian May 7, 2021 at 12:41 AM I agree Darlene but what about pets need to become a parent? Pets bodily needs? Thanks for reading and commenting. Have a great day ahead friend. Take care, God bless! Rama