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A Pet Minichu

Stole my heart at first sight
He followed my steps because he was devoted
Brown eyes, bright

He was cherished
A handsome pup, silken coated
Perished

Heartache
How I doted
Jake

Stole my heart at first sight
A handsome pup, silken coated
Jake


April 14, 2021
A Pet Minichu Contest
Sponsor: Mohan Chutani

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Date: 5/10/2021 2:05:00 PM
Very nicely done. A wonderful pet you had. Congrats.
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Date: 5/9/2021 4:20:00 AM
Very Nice!
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Date: 4/16/2021 10:34:00 AM
Minichu is difficult to do well; this one is amazing.
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Date: 4/14/2021 9:41:00 AM
Once you fall in love with such a lovely dog, there's no going back.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/14/2021 10:11:00 AM
He owned my heart. Thank you, Victor.
Date: 4/14/2021 7:36:00 AM
Your pen is aflame Jenna, Lovely tribute to Jake. Is this non fiction? If so he's a lovely dog. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/14/2021 7:38:00 AM
Thank you very much, Tom. The photo is not of my Jake, but this pup is nearly identical. Jake was my shadow.

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