A Pet Minichu

Stole my heart at first sight
He followed my steps because he was devoted
Brown eyes, bright

He was cherished
A handsome pup, silken coated
Perished

Heartache
How I doted
Jake

Stole my heart at first sight
A handsome pup, silken coated
Jake


April 14, 2021
A Pet Minichu Contest
Sponsor: Mohan Chutani
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Dietrich Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 2:05 PM
Very nicely done. A wonderful pet you had. Congrats.
Alex Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 4:20 AM
Very Nice!
Krutsinger Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 10:34 AM
Minichu is difficult to do well; this one is amazing.
Buhagiar Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 9:41 AM
Once you fall in love with such a lovely dog, there's no going back.
Logan Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 10:11 AM
He owned my heart. Thank you, Victor.
Cunningham Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 7:36 AM
Your pen is aflame Jenna, Lovely tribute to Jake. Is this non fiction? If so he's a lovely dog. Tom
Logan Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 7:38 AM
Thank you very much, Tom. The photo is not of my Jake, but this pup is nearly identical. Jake was my shadow.
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