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A Pet Minichu

Petite five-pound Yorkie; mother nature is full of small surprises, he's scant dorky. Mind of his own, always so hungry, gnaws on his dull bone. Wind howls, Tator, my whizz, growls. I wish my small Yorkie could talk, instead, demands with his growls. 4/11/2021 Poetry Contest: A Pet Minichu Sponsored by: Mohan Chutani 6-12-3 ......4-8-2..... 2-4-1..... 6-8-1 6-12-3 ......4-8-2..... 2-4-1..... 6-8-1- aba cbc dAd …. a,b,d third line Minichu format: Total 12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each) Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 4th stanza consists of repeat of: 1st line of stanza 1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3. Syllable count : Stanza 1: 6,12,3, Stanza 2: 4,8,2, Stanza 3: 2,4,1, Stanza 4: 6,8,1

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Date: 5/10/2021 2:09:00 PM
so cute!! Congrats on the win
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Date: 5/9/2021 5:21:00 AM
Very Beautiful!
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Date: 4/29/2021 6:29:00 PM
A little homage to your pet. I wrote poems about my tiger tabby. Yes, I sometimes wish he could talk. Say meow each time I ask a question of hold converse with him. His name is Boy Baron Lewis. I understand most of his language.
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Date: 4/13/2021 4:33:00 PM
Is your puppy's name Tater? (that's such a great name!) Adorable, best wishes for the contest, Eve~
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Date: 4/13/2021 2:26:00 PM
Very cute photo. Can easily relate to communicative growls. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/12/2021 9:51:00 PM
BRILLIANT. All the best for Contest.
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Date: 4/12/2021 8:24:00 PM
Charming, descriptive write, Eve. Janice
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Date: 4/12/2021 11:07:00 AM
Nicely done, Eve:-) I enjoyed your take on the theme!
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Date: 4/12/2021 7:18:00 AM
They are great companions Eve, they all have their own ways. Hope you're well Tom
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Date: 4/12/2021 5:11:00 AM
They have their own secret language talk don't they lol, even a growl means something, mom feed me, mom I got to go pee, or I don't like it, Thank you for sharing, much love to you. xo
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Date: 4/12/2021 12:10:00 AM
So many love dogs on the Soup. Hope your contest goes well.
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