A Pet Minichu

Petite five-pound Yorkie; 
mother nature is full of small surprises, he's 
scant dorky. 

Mind of his own, 
always so hungry, gnaws on his
dull bone. 

Wind howls, 
Tator, my whizz,
growls. 

I wish my small Yorkie 
could talk, instead, demands with his 
growls.

4/11/2021

Poetry Contest: A Pet Minichu 
Sponsored by: Mohan Chutani  

6-12-3 ......4-8-2..... 2-4-1..... 6-8-1
6-12-3 ......4-8-2..... 2-4-1..... 6-8-1-
aba   cbc   dAd ….  a,b,d third line

Minichu format: Total 12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each) 
Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 
4th stanza consists of repeat of: 1st line of stanza 1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 
3. Syllable count : Stanza 1: 6,12,3, Stanza 2: 4,8,2, Stanza 3: 2,4,1, Stanza 4: 6,8,1
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Dietrich Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 2:09 PM
so cute!! Congrats on the win
Alex Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 5:21 AM
Very Beautiful!
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 6:29 PM
A little homage to your pet. I wrote poems about my tiger tabby. Yes, I sometimes wish he could talk. Say meow each time I ask a question of hold converse with him. His name is Boy Baron Lewis. I understand most of his language.
Faulkner Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 4:33 PM
Is your puppy's name Tater? (that's such a great name!) Adorable, best wishes for the contest, Eve~
Thirtyseven Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 2:26 PM
Very cute photo. Can easily relate to communicative growls. Best of luck in the contest.
Dutta Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 9:51 PM
BRILLIANT. All the best for Contest.
Canerdy Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 8:24 PM
Charming, descriptive write, Eve. Janice
Ibeh Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 11:07 AM
Nicely done, Eve:-) I enjoyed your take on the theme!
Cunningham Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 7:18 AM
They are great companions Eve, they all have their own ways. Hope you're well Tom
Rose  Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 5:11 AM
They have their own secret language talk don't they lol, even a growl means something, mom feed me, mom I got to go pee, or I don't like it, Thank you for sharing, much love to you. xo
Buhagiar Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 12:10 AM
So many love dogs on the Soup. Hope your contest goes well.
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