A Personal Fog

A stinging mist colors my eyes
with vaporous pall of regret.
Oh, if only i could concede
and let the sun rays dissipate
this nebulous mentality
stealthily invading mind, heart,
a gray impasse of reluctance
that obliterates the future.

August 2, 2026
Eight by Eight Poetry Contest
Nette Onclaud, Sponsor
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Daniels Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 12:03 AM
A good introspection short-form write, Faye. ThkU for sharing and Congrats on placement in Contest. Sending blessings., Ghairo.
Dietrich Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 1:36 AM
Very intelligent writing, Faye. A well deserved win 👏
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