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A Perfect World

in a perfect world

        no roses die on the vine

            spring is eternal

                natures gifts are abundant

                    in sunlit skies rainbows shine...

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Joe Maverick

Date: 8/20/2015 5:00:00 PM

Yes sounds perfect Sharon, now can you give directions; asap???

Allan Koven

Date: 8/13/2013 10:09:00 AM

Ah Shar, if wishes came true, perhaps we would be living on a distant star. But earth beckons and we must awaken to each day without knowing whether it will be rain or shine. Perhaps that is the glory of it. Still all in all, your poem rings of peaceful dreams and happy thoughts touching us with the gentleness of a playful song.

Sharon Ruebel
Date: 8/13/2013 1:34:00 PM

Yes Allan, I would be the one swinging on a star, while dangling my feet in the colors of a rainbow. Ahhh the emotions of a poet...Thank you for your kind remarks, I am glad that my poetry moves you. I enjoy reading your work and look forward to more...SMiles, Shar..........

The Situation

Date: 5/14/2013 5:23:00 PM

Sounds like heaven

James Marshall Goff

Date: 5/11/2013 7:34:00 PM

Sharon, i saw a double rainbow arc 100 miles over Lake Superior a few years back...love your poem! jimbo

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/11/2013 5:01:00 PM

Sharon :-) Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *Linda

Michael Ainsley

Date: 4/12/2013 11:19:00 AM

the heart wants what the heart wants and ;And love lasts forever. I must spend more time with your words Sharon ; The inspire me to write more.

Sharon Ruebel
Date: 4/12/2013 3:58:00 PM

Hello Michael, Inspiration in all forms is what writers live for. I am so very happy to be a small part of yours...Thank you for visiting me and leaving such a special note...Smiles

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/11/2013 11:54:00 AM

- A beautiful world, Sharon! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joe Flach

Date: 4/10/2013 1:03:00 PM

But with no imperfections, how would we know to value those things? Just like I know this is a beautiful poem because of others, not so perfect, I have seen before it. I hope all your skies are lit with rainbows - you just put one in my world. Joe

Sharon Ruebel
Date: 4/10/2013 2:23:00 PM

Hello Joe, Thank you for reading me today and leaving such a beautiful message.......Smiles