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A Perfect World

By still and tranquil waters deep, where birds fly here and there, and bears enjoy their winter's sleep-awaiting Spring and a land anew, where once trees hung heavy with summer leaves- and lovers words floated on a gentle breeze, fishermen waited patiently for their first bite- stand for a moment and the world seemed right.

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Date: 1/28/2020 8:24:00 AM
Lovely flow and imagery. Well done, Julie.
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Julie Achilles
Date: 1/29/2020 3:26:00 AM
So kind, thanks, Julie
Date: 1/7/2020 10:58:00 AM
A lovely imagery painted with fine expressions dearest, Julie!
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Julie Achilles
Date: 1/8/2020 7:29:00 AM
thank you kindest demetrios

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