A Perfect World

By still and tranquil waters deep, where birds fly here and there,
and bears enjoy their winter's sleep-awaiting Spring and a land anew,
where once trees hung heavy with summer leaves-
and lovers words floated on a gentle breeze,
fishermen waited patiently for their first bite-
stand for a moment and the world seemed right.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Gauthier Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 8:24 AM
Lovely flow and imagery. Well done, Julie.
Achilles Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 3:26 AM
So kind, thanks, Julie
Trifiatis Avatar
January 7, 2020 at 10:58 AM
A lovely imagery painted with fine expressions dearest, Julie!
Achilles Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 7:29 AM
thank you kindest demetrios
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