10/12/17
First place
August 2018 Standard Contest by Brian Strand
Sudden gust swayed your curly hair. My emotion made vibrant leap. My tingling passion tends to flare. For moments heart beats seemed to skip. On stream strand we just stood at ease. Our wobbling phase in slow progress. Getting startled on blowing breeze, You came closer, My dear princess. A perfect storm hit heart violent. I could not control my first kiss. You did not resist being silent. Love got truly sealed, not to miss. My best bliss whirled in emotive urge. All my yearnings are crowned with glory. My feelings in fervent fervour to surge ending in a splendid love story.
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