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A Perfect Metaphor

A perfect metaphor for everyone's life is like Standing up in a hammock or standing up on a bike Now that's totally silly And quite unhealthily Could fall down, break your crown, should stick to a trike

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Date: 1/11/2018 8:40:00 AM
Daredevil Jack went riding//without his skivvies for hiding//his personal things//He wanted wings//when he crashed and started sliding. RISK ON ADVENTURER OF THE FROZEN NORTH!!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 1/11/2018 8:47:00 AM
I've always be a daredevil... that's why my autograph is so highly valued today!!! HOPE THE RAIN IS LETTING UP!!!
Date: 1/10/2018 3:43:00 PM
Yeah, will never lose balance.. a wise limerick my friend...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 1/10/2018 3:45:00 PM
I post these for the common good of mankind!!! No need to applaud!!!
Date: 1/10/2018 9:46:00 AM
Aha, the thought of never again kissing the pavement sold me on the trike ;)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 1/10/2018 10:15:00 AM
Pavements are hard kissers, ever cause swollen lips! lol xxx

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