A Perfect Metaphor

A perfect metaphor for everyone's life is like Standing up in a hammock or standing up on a bike Now that's totally silly And quite unhealthily Could fall down, break your crown, should stick to a trike
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January 11, 2018 at 8:40 AM
Daredevil Jack went riding//without his skivvies for hiding//his personal things//He wanted wings//when he crashed and started sliding. RISK ON ADVENTURER OF THE FROZEN NORTH!!!
Ellison Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 8:47 AM
I've always be a daredevil... that's why my autograph is so highly valued today!!! HOPE THE RAIN IS LETTING UP!!!
One Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 3:43 PM
Yeah, will never lose balance.. a wise limerick my friend...
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January 10, 2018 at 3:45 PM
I post these for the common good of mankind!!! No need to applaud!!!
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January 10, 2018 at 9:46 AM
Aha, the thought of never again kissing the pavement sold me on the trike ;)
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January 10, 2018 at 10:15 AM
Pavements are hard kissers, ever cause swollen lips! lol xxx
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