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A Perfect Day

we walk the Pier, hand in hand holding tightly, fingers clasped bumping shoulders, bumping hips connecting sweetly just like this sun shines hotly on our faces memories new, engaging all walking, talking, getting to know everything new, along we go the morning winds down, time to part one long kiss as we depart before I get a few feet away I get a text saying "a perfect day"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/28/2010 9:16:00 AM
awww just lovelly sarah xx
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Date: 6/27/2010 4:14:00 PM
(smiles) I like this happy, bouncy poem. WEll done!
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