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A Perfect Day

we walk the Pier, hand in hand
holding tightly, fingers clasped
bumping shoulders, bumping hips
connecting sweetly just like this

sun shines hotly on our faces
memories new, engaging all
walking, talking, getting to know
everything new, along we go

the morning winds down, time to part
one long kiss as we depart
before I get a few feet away
I get a text saying "a perfect day"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/28/2010 9:16:00 AM
awww just lovelly sarah xx
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Date: 6/27/2010 4:14:00 PM
(smiles) I like this happy, bouncy poem. WEll done!
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