A Perfect-

A perfect crime.
The paper the victim,
the weapon a pen.

A perfect time.
The thoughts in my head,
a prayer, I say, amen.

A perfect day.
The mood is right,
it is time to begin.

A perfect way.
So I write, Father please,
forgive me for my sin.

A perfect start.
The liquid poison,
slowly kills the page.

A perfect heart.
Slowly breaking,
from all the rage.

A perfect death.
Please go in peace,
Your soul to keep.

A perfect breath.
For it's the last,
please don't weep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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April 6, 2013 at 10:14 PM
STEPHANIE, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-). Have yourself a good one. Always~ LINDA
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April 4, 2013 at 11:25 AM
what can one say, just perfect!, lovely write, well done.. Gordon
Amezimi Avatar
April 3, 2013 at 3:39 AM
And HE will answer anyone who can ask like that... beautiful! very well done... Ami.
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March 28, 2013 at 2:43 PM
Welcome Stephanie !!! You are sure to be loved here on Soup!! Excellent poetry!!! Hugs Michael. Ps love the last name :•)
Andresen Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 12:32 PM
Perfect poem to start with! - Well done, Stephanie! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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March 28, 2013 at 10:08 PM
Thanks!
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